This is an illustration for a TakePart infographic. It was meant to be dark and ominous. Let me know what you think.
over 1 year ago
Have you tried flipping it horizontally? It might be a language thing, but I think it might read better from left to right. I also think a closer, more cramped crop would do better for establishing tension (or a more top-heavy composition?) as the really wide open sky tends to give the viewer a huge place to rest and makes the kind of horrific events seem really small and comfortably linear. Hope this is useful!
Actually didnt think of flipping it horizontally. Ill try it out. Thanks for the input.
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