First draft of some wedding invitations. Already have a couple adjustments with the wording that I've noticed... Any suggestions?
over 1 year ago
I like this! I think there are a lot of really nice details! One small thing - where the "ribbon" folds back - it's red where it maybe should be black...like the ribbon is missing a small piece? But I am picking, because I think there are other really nice details, like the subtle ampersand, and the graphic elements , also I like the fonts (s)! :)
The script/curly font you chose obviously doesn't work on the left with "The One I" since it covers it up. The kerning in "Isaac" and "rachel" is pretty rough you should probably manually do it.
Thank you both! Very good feedback! I will work on those things!
I am sorry, I hit Post Comment too soon and meant to also compliment you on the layout of the invitation and your font choice. I think it's elegant yet modern, good choice.
I agree with @Daniel DeHart - really lovely things going on! Please continue to post updates, would love to see the progression :)
of course! :) Thank you both!
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