I don't like the way the login fields look. I would prefer a little wider in width, and less height. They just look odd to me.
I'm assuming that the "manage your relationships better area" is a hover state, but if it isn't I would much rather have it as such.
For the navigation menu in the header, I would try to space them out a bit and add a slightly rounded corner box as the background hover state. It adds something extra to it personally.
The tagline doesn't stand out enough to me. I like the font. Maybe try upping the font size a tad bit, and going with darker shade of the color you're using now.
In the footer, I would prefer to have company listing above the letters and centered instead. Give the footer navigation the same treatment as the footer. Also, add some space between the copyright statement and navigation above it.
On the 3bays.html page, the the tagline copy starting with "3bays" is under the same situation as the tagline in the header on the other page. What I mentioned there should work here too.
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Kyee
:)
11 months ago
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Dan Edwards
Really nice Kyee!
11 months ago
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Jamal Jackson
Hey Kyee, good start. Here are my comments:
I don't like the way the login fields look. I would prefer a little wider in width, and less height. They just look odd to me.
I'm assuming that the "manage your relationships better area" is a hover state, but if it isn't I would much rather have it as such.
For the navigation menu in the header, I would try to space them out a bit and add a slightly rounded corner box as the background hover state. It adds something extra to it personally.
The tagline doesn't stand out enough to me. I like the font. Maybe try upping the font size a tad bit, and going with darker shade of the color you're using now.
In the footer, I would prefer to have company listing above the letters and centered instead. Give the footer navigation the same treatment as the footer. Also, add some space between the copyright statement and navigation above it.
On the 3bays.html page, the the tagline copy starting with "3bays" is under the same situation as the tagline in the header on the other page. What I mentioned there should work here too.
Good clean design overall, great work!
11 months ago
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Mani
love it @Kyee
11 months ago
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Kyee
@Jamal Jackson thanks for the suggestion about the header text being a little light on the eye. I've fixed with a darker color and bolder text.
11 months ago
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Jamal Jackson
@Kyee No prob man, I love just spitting out ideas.
11 months ago
Small typo on one of the headings: Visability should be Visibility. :)
11 months ago
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Nuruzzaman Sheikh
lovely work mate!
11 months ago
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Andy Shaw
Love all but the noise on the header
11 months ago
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Dhiren Adesara
nice !
11 months ago
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Bruno Felicio
Just looks perfect! No more no less!
11 months ago
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Zachary Burghardt
Very clean!
11 months ago
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Eelco Guntlisbergen
I love everything about it, except for the big padding-left on the login fields. Looks very sharp & professional.
11 months ago
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Matt Hall
Beautiful!
11 months ago
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Shaun Moynihan
Liking this a lot @Kyee.
10 months ago