hi Ruben,
I'm not someone who likes to tell anyone how to do it better, because I'm not perfect either, but I feel like giving you feedback on this one.
1. Lab is a very often used word, which is just overused, from my personal opinion, I would stick simply with "Ruben Bristian", because that is you, and that's personal, for your brand there's nothing stronger and more personal than your own name.
2. the shattered broken circle doesn't feel right, not only that I don't get what it communicates, it also looks very bad at smaller size and is therefore impossible to recognize or read...... the broken circle also makes it impossible for me to see the logo or even recognize a letter, it irritates my eyes and distorts the logomark, which should be clearly visible!
that's all I can say for now!
hope it helps. and it isn't meant to be mean or rude in anyway, it's just honest feedback.
1. You're somehow right about the name, but in my opinion using your full name is also often used.. But maybe you're right and it's better than to use a common work.
2. I was just playing with the shattered idea, trying to make something to make the logo not look so plain, and when i was done, i also couldn't read the logo, but i didn't gave too much attention on this :))
So i'll give more thought about your feedback and work on this more..:)
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Finally managed to update my logo! :)
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11 months ago
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Daniel Keller
hi Ruben,
I'm not someone who likes to tell anyone how to do it better, because I'm not perfect either, but I feel like giving you feedback on this one.
1. Lab is a very often used word, which is just overused, from my personal opinion, I would stick simply with "Ruben Bristian", because that is you, and that's personal, for your brand there's nothing stronger and more personal than your own name.
2. the shattered broken circle doesn't feel right, not only that I don't get what it communicates, it also looks very bad at smaller size and is therefore impossible to recognize or read...... the broken circle also makes it impossible for me to see the logo or even recognize a letter, it irritates my eyes and distorts the logomark, which should be clearly visible!
that's all I can say for now!
hope it helps. and it isn't meant to be mean or rude in anyway, it's just honest feedback.
11 months ago
Thanks for your feedback Daniel!
1. You're somehow right about the name, but in my opinion using your full name is also often used.. But maybe you're right and it's better than to use a common work.
2. I was just playing with the shattered idea, trying to make something to make the logo not look so plain, and when i was done, i also couldn't read the logo, but i didn't gave too much attention on this :))
So i'll give more thought about your feedback and work on this more..:)
11 months ago