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playing around with a new script. Things don't quite feel right yet. Any suggestions?
11 months ago
perhaps some extension in the p's descender?
You are a shithead for being so good at this.
Love and miss you dude.
11 months ago
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Steffen Nørgaard Andersen
...that feeling when you expect to see a static, normal shot, but then it turns out to be a flashing gif! - Nice work @Chris - The vertical line in the "y" and "k" looks a bit too thick though. Just a little
11 months ago
This looks awesome as is! It might be cool to play with the 'C' a bit. It's the only letter that looks like it could improve, in my opinion.
11 months ago
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Lindsay Goldner
yes to what @Pasquale D'Silva said. And maybe increase the leading so that the y is more clearly a y, versus a u.
11 months ago
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Simon Walker
Looks great to me.
11 months ago
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David M. Smith
Looks awesome Chris! I think the C gets a little close to the u and p. And possible have the decender of the P fall a little further.
One other fine detail, the lowercase c feels a little more italic compared to the rest of the letterforms. Magical none the less
11 months ago
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Jason Carne
I agree with everything David said - also, it may be a cool idea to connect the uppercase C and the P in a similar manner to the way you handled the bottom of the K.
11 months ago
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Brandon Rike
I think the J needs to be a bit bigger and pronounced, and the descender on the P to come below the C. And for me to do some JC freelance.
11 months ago
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Andrew Lockhart
The line from the "k" to the "e" doesn't look like it quite matches up. Other than that, and what other people have said, it looks awesome.
11 months ago
It's like a disco party for my face. The J and C definitely feel too small to me, but this looks like a solid start.
11 months ago
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Evan Stremke
The s gets a little convoluted, maybe just having the tail retrace its path instead of looping it through the counter would help?
Otherwise I think this is A-O.K.
11 months ago
Extra credit for the flashing colors.
11 months ago
Nice. Reminds me of candy script. The extenders could extend a bit further... eg. on the p and h.
11 months ago
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Mitzie Testani
Clever mark.
11 months ago
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Nikita Prokhorov
@Andrew Colin Beck, how about extra SEIZURES for the flashing colors? ;)
@Chris DeLorenzo, love the script and the letter junctures I think that it's a bit too tight overall and could use a bit of negative space in the kerning as well as the leaving. Once it has some breathing room, I think that will (believe it or not) resolve most of the issues here. Other than that...really nice!
11 months ago
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James Blevins
Sweet... literally. Haha
11 months ago
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Joseph Alessio
I love this! Absolutely amazing. I won't try to give any thoughts because everyone has said it all already but this is beautiful! Although, I'm with @Nikita on the seizures!
11 months ago
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Mike Jones
This is rad bro! But you were asking for suggestions so I will add my 2 cents also...The J & C need a bit more spacing between them vertically & possibly the C be more like the lower case C? Again just opinions, your work is solid. Keep on inspiring us to get better! thx!!
11 months ago
You guys are amazing! Thank you for all the suggestions and feedback on the script. I will honestly try all of these, I think giving it some more breathing room, making that 'c' look less italic, thinning that Y K connection, extending the P, making that J and C bigger, will help it a lot. Crap, this is nowhere near done. But now I know what I have to do. thanks again.
11 months ago
Try opening up the spacing a little.
11 months ago
I am late to the party, but in typical art school fashion, I will say, "I agree with a lot of what's been said."
Evening out the negative spaces in the middle of and between characters is probably the biggest hurdle. I am confident you'll hit this one outta the park!
11 months ago
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Fabio Benedetti
@Chris DeLorenzo looking tasty man!
11 months ago
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George Gliddon
Love the type, but the GIF is just giving me a headache!
11 months ago
Cool!
11 months ago