playing around with a new script. Things don't quite feel right yet. Any suggestions?
11 months ago
perhaps some extension in the p's descender?
You are a shithead for being so good at this.
Love and miss you dude.
...that feeling when you expect to see a static, normal shot, but then it turns out to be a flashing gif! - Nice work @Chris - The vertical line in the "y" and "k" looks a bit too thick though. Just a little
This looks awesome as is! It might be cool to play with the 'C' a bit. It's the only letter that looks like it could improve, in my opinion.
yes to what @Pasquale D'Silva said. And maybe increase the leading so that the y is more clearly a y, versus a u.
Looks great to me.
Looks awesome Chris! I think the C gets a little close to the u and p. And possible have the decender of the P fall a little further.
One other fine detail, the lowercase c feels a little more italic compared to the rest of the letterforms. Magical none the less
I agree with everything David said - also, it may be a cool idea to connect the uppercase C and the P in a similar manner to the way you handled the bottom of the K.
I think the J needs to be a bit bigger and pronounced, and the descender on the P to come below the C. And for me to do some JC freelance.
The line from the "k" to the "e" doesn't look like it quite matches up. Other than that, and what other people have said, it looks awesome.
It's like a disco party for my face. The J and C definitely feel too small to me, but this looks like a solid start.
The s gets a little convoluted, maybe just having the tail retrace its path instead of looping it through the counter would help?
Otherwise I think this is A-O.K.
Extra credit for the flashing colors.
Nice. Reminds me of candy script. The extenders could extend a bit further... eg. on the p and h.
@Andrew Colin Beck, how about extra SEIZURES for the flashing colors? ;)
@Chris DeLorenzo, love the script and the letter junctures I think that it's a bit too tight overall and could use a bit of negative space in the kerning as well as the leaving. Once it has some breathing room, I think that will (believe it or not) resolve most of the issues here. Other than that...really nice!
Sweet... literally. Haha
I love this! Absolutely amazing. I won't try to give any thoughts because everyone has said it all already but this is beautiful! Although, I'm with @Nikita on the seizures!
This is rad bro! But you were asking for suggestions so I will add my 2 cents also...The J & C need a bit more spacing between them vertically & possibly the C be more like the lower case C? Again just opinions, your work is solid. Keep on inspiring us to get better! thx!!
You guys are amazing! Thank you for all the suggestions and feedback on the script. I will honestly try all of these, I think giving it some more breathing room, making that 'c' look less italic, thinning that Y K connection, extending the P, making that J and C bigger, will help it a lot. Crap, this is nowhere near done. But now I know what I have to do. thanks again.
Try opening up the spacing a little.
I am late to the party, but in typical art school fashion, I will say, "I agree with a lot of what's been said."
Evening out the negative spaces in the middle of and between characters is probably the biggest hurdle. I am confident you'll hit this one outta the park!
@Chris DeLorenzo looking tasty man!
Love the type, but the GIF is just giving me a headache!
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