quick note: at a glance I was seeing an 'e' when I was supposed to see an 'a'. maybe curl the finishing swoop on the 'e' or keep it from connecting to the left side? Otherwise, digging the with highlights version
Agreeing with the above comments on with, it works really well with the gradient. Really love how you did that top 't' and its crossbar, beautiful touch! The way the middle swash fits over the 'm' beneath it works nicely too. I wonder if there might be a way to make the 'A' counter a little larger as it almost gets lost in between the heavy strokes (maybe bringing its lower right point down/to the right a bit?)
@Nick A and r is very loose. Same with the t and i. Conversely v and a is quite tight. All spacings could do with some adjustment but these are the main one's that stand out.
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Nick Slater
Do you like with or with out highlights?
11 months ago
+1 for with
11 months ago
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Nikita Prokhorov
With..gives it some nice depth.
11 months ago
With! ;)
11 months ago
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Doug Penick
WITH for sure dude. You nailed this project dude. So good!
11 months ago
yeah yeah, the highlights are nice.
11 months ago
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Olga Vasik
perfect! with highlights for sure!
11 months ago
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Jeremy Teff
With man, You killed this one.
11 months ago
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Daniel Keller
With, and I totally love it!
11 months ago
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Joachim Vu
As everyone else, with, and great job by the way.
11 months ago
fantastico
11 months ago
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Sean Bolak
with
11 months ago
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Nick Slater
:D you guys for all the kind words!!
11 months ago
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Kassie Wright
With the highlights. love it!
11 months ago
As always nice.:) I think only word "the" could be a little bit higher from second ones
11 months ago
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James Blevins
This is looking awesome Nick!
11 months ago
With highlight! But i would try to make them a little bit smoother. What you think?
11 months ago
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Dan Lehman
quick note: at a glance I was seeing an 'e' when I was supposed to see an 'a'. maybe curl the finishing swoop on the 'e' or keep it from connecting to the left side? Otherwise, digging the with highlights version
11 months ago
I love the gradient !
11 months ago
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Sean Bolak
This inspired me to do some hand drawn text, I've never done the digitalization thing before with it. Pretty fun stuff!
11 months ago
Agreeing with the above comments on with, it works really well with the gradient. Really love how you did that top 't' and its crossbar, beautiful touch! The way the middle swash fits over the 'm' beneath it works nicely too. I wonder if there might be a way to make the 'A' counter a little larger as it almost gets lost in between the heavy strokes (maybe bringing its lower right point down/to the right a bit?)
11 months ago
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Jerome Collinge
With looks a lot better, someone has already mentioned but it gives it nice depth.
11 months ago
Highlights are not really the issue. Kerning and stroke widths are more the concern.
11 months ago
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Nick Slater
@Dan (Hypagraphic) Thanks Dan for the feedback. Where does the kerning and widths bother you?
11 months ago
@Nick A and r is very loose. Same with the t and i. Conversely v and a is quite tight. All spacings could do with some adjustment but these are the main one's that stand out.
11 months ago