Ashley

The Redemption

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18 Responses

  1. Ashley Ashley Yousling

    Beginning stages of branding for a gluten-free bakery in Park City, UT.

    The branding is going "prohibition" style with a modern flair.

    Any thoughts, suggestions, hmm?

    over 1 year ago

  2. Screen shot 2011-03-25 at 00 Carlos Prioglio

    I love that texture!!

    over 1 year ago

  3. Behance-avatar1 Vanja Blajic

    You definitely nailed the prohibition style!Lovely.

    over 1 year ago

  4. Twitter-icon Social Design House

    I could see tightening up "A Gluten Free Bakery" and "The Redemption". they seem a little spaced out. Not sure if the banner is really doing anything. If it contained the tagline or year it would make more sense, give it purpose, etc.

    "The Redemption" part looks fantastic though. The way the R dips below the e makes me smile. Well played. Excited to see where this ends up.

    likes

    over 1 year ago

  5. Pro Confunded-square Matt Kump

    ^

    over 1 year ago

  6. Bruno Bruno

    Phaeton <3

    likes

    over 1 year ago

  7. Pro 483365_10150687556574769_500899768_8788991_1933571927_n Zach Inglis

    This is gorgeous! Congrats.

    I would love to see it a bit more kerned as the others say though.

    over 1 year ago

  8. Profilbilde (07 Kristian Hjelle

    SUPERB!

    over 1 year ago

  9. Pro Logo Julien Renvoye

    LOVE IT ! What is the font you used ahsley ?

    over 1 year ago

  10. Pro New-bw-twitter Christian Ross

    Wow, double-like.

    over 1 year ago

  11. Tweet3 Kamlesh Munot

    Wow really inspiring!

    over 1 year ago

  12. Pro Avatar Chris Rowe

    Lovely!

    over 1 year ago

  13. Untitled-1 Rich Gustke

    Something about the 'The' is throwing me off a bit... I'm wondering what it may look like if 'The' is above Redemption, and 'Gluten Free Bakery' is underneath, and maybe put the 'EST 2010' inside the ribbon. Just a thought.

    over 1 year ago

  14. Ashley Ashley Yousling

    Love all your guys' feedback...I've been working on integrated your ideas/suggestions and will post a follow up soon. Gracias!

    over 1 year ago

  15. Pro Jr-engineer-id Matt Kaufenberg

    This is just fantastic!

    over 1 year ago

  16. Train Patrick King

    Very pretty. Pull the elements closer together through a rhythmically pleasing series of shapes that flow together as one. The decorative banner element below could be a lot smaller, if it's needed at all. What visual clue might say prohibition better than it does?

    over 1 year ago

  17. Pro Cresk_avatar Gert van Duinen

    Love it.

    about 1 year ago

  18. ЛАМПА 22 Igor_Eezo

    Awesome!

    8 months ago

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