I could see tightening up "A Gluten Free Bakery" and "The Redemption". they seem a little spaced out. Not sure if the banner is really doing anything. If it contained the tagline or year it would make more sense, give it purpose, etc.
"The Redemption" part looks fantastic though. The way the R dips below the e makes me smile. Well played. Excited to see where this ends up.
Something about the 'The' is throwing me off a bit... I'm wondering what it may look like if 'The' is above Redemption, and 'Gluten Free Bakery' is underneath, and maybe put the 'EST 2010' inside the ribbon. Just a thought.
Very pretty. Pull the elements closer together through a rhythmically pleasing series of shapes that flow together as one. The decorative banner element below could be a lot smaller, if it's needed at all. What visual clue might say prohibition better than it does?
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Beginning stages of branding for a gluten-free bakery in Park City, UT.
The branding is going "prohibition" style with a modern flair.
Any thoughts, suggestions, hmm?
over 1 year ago
I love that texture!!
over 1 year ago
You definitely nailed the prohibition style!Lovely.
over 1 year ago
I could see tightening up "A Gluten Free Bakery" and "The Redemption". they seem a little spaced out. Not sure if the banner is really doing anything. If it contained the tagline or year it would make more sense, give it purpose, etc.
"The Redemption" part looks fantastic though. The way the R dips below the e makes me smile. Well played. Excited to see where this ends up.
over 1 year ago
Pro
Matt Kump
^
over 1 year ago
Phaeton <3
over 1 year ago
Pro
Zach Inglis
This is gorgeous! Congrats.
I would love to see it a bit more kerned as the others say though.
over 1 year ago
SUPERB!
over 1 year ago
Pro
Julien Renvoye
LOVE IT ! What is the font you used ahsley ?
over 1 year ago
Pro
Christian Ross
Wow, double-like.
over 1 year ago
Wow really inspiring!
over 1 year ago
Pro
Chris Rowe
Lovely!
over 1 year ago
Something about the 'The' is throwing me off a bit... I'm wondering what it may look like if 'The' is above Redemption, and 'Gluten Free Bakery' is underneath, and maybe put the 'EST 2010' inside the ribbon. Just a thought.
over 1 year ago
Love all your guys' feedback...I've been working on integrated your ideas/suggestions and will post a follow up soon. Gracias!
over 1 year ago
Pro
Matt Kaufenberg
This is just fantastic!
over 1 year ago
Very pretty. Pull the elements closer together through a rhythmically pleasing series of shapes that flow together as one. The decorative banner element below could be a lot smaller, if it's needed at all. What visual clue might say prohibition better than it does?
over 1 year ago
Pro
Gert van Duinen
Love it.
about 1 year ago
Awesome!
8 months ago