"FIRST" in flight

6 Responses

1. Pro Erin Potter

   a little more of the concept. stil looking at cleaning up some things but this is the general direction. thoughts, as always, are welcomed.

   @Claire Coullon this one is right up your alley

   11 months ago

2. Pro Ryan Wheaton

   This is killer! Love the look and style of the script

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   11 months ago

3. Pro Neil Tasker

   I got kinda confused in the flight part, I think it's because the L gets lost and the g can be seen as an a to me on first glance

   11 months ago

4. Pro kirk visola

   Sick EP. Nice tribute to your home state.

   11 months ago

5. Claire Coullon

   Good to see the continuation of this, really nice style. I especially like what you've done with the overall angles, it doesn't feel like a conventional script at all.

   Like @Neil mentioned, the 'flight' part is a little confusing, I think that the 'F' diagonal slicing through is making the 'L' get lost a bit. It's tricky because that slant looks great and mirrors the one in 'First' beautifully, so not sure what to suggest... I do love the connection between the 'i-g' though, that's really unique.

   11 months ago

6. First in Flight Redux A little hand-drawn rebound of my FIRST shot of this famous license plate motto.

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   First in Flight Redux

   by Erin Potter

   A little hand-drawn rebound of my FIRST shot of this famous license plate motto.

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   8 months ago