"FIRST" in flight

6 Responses

1. Erin Potter

   a little more of the concept. stil looking at cleaning up some things but this is the general direction. thoughts, as always, are welcomed.

   @Claire Coullon this one is right up your alley

   about 1 year ago

2. Ryan Wheaton

   This is killer! Love the look and style of the script

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   about 1 year ago

3. Neil Tasker

   I got kinda confused in the flight part, I think it's because the L gets lost and the g can be seen as an a to me on first glance

   about 1 year ago

4. kirk visola

   Sick EP. Nice tribute to your home state.

   about 1 year ago

5. Claire Coullon

   Good to see the continuation of this, really nice style. I especially like what you've done with the overall angles, it doesn't feel like a conventional script at all.

   Like @Neil mentioned, the 'flight' part is a little confusing, I think that the 'F' diagonal slicing through is making the 'L' get lost a bit. It's tricky because that slant looks great and mirrors the one in 'First' beautifully, so not sure what to suggest... I do love the connection between the 'i-g' though, that's really unique.

   about 1 year ago

6. First in Flight Redux A little hand-drawn rebound of my FIRST shot of this famous license plate motto.

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   First in Flight Redux

   by Erin Potter

   A little hand-drawn rebound of my FIRST shot of this famous license plate motto.

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   9 months ago