I like this a lot.
over 1 year ago
Trying to decide if I need that decorative doodad coming off the first n...
Hmmm… can you add a full screen shot without it so we can compare?
I'd say yes. Breaks up the negative space, and ties the first and last name together.
@Diane Faye Zerr Whoomp there it is. Theres an option on there with a hair pin in the empty space too. That was the original direction (she's a hair stylist), but I think I like this swashy deal better. Its curves could probably use some work though...
I like it without the swash, but let me ask - how would it look with the hair pin as the crossbar for the t in Kristen ;) But make the pin the same thickness as the letters. Could that work?!
I feel like your "K" needs to be wider and have more of a presence in the overall composition. The way it is currently, the leg and arm of the "K" dominate the focus and almost negate the fact that it's a "K" at all.
Is she related to Debbie Gibson?
@Diane Faye Zerr I actually tried that early on, but it took away from the overall flowyness of the mark...
@Dave Bailey K was a real bastard and does still need some work. Whats your opinion on the swash on the n? Thats the issue at hand...
@Steve DeCusatis Magic Eight Ball says: Outlook not so good
Okay, I was just curious. Don't ruin the flowyness. :) I still say no swash on the n.
by John Kane
Think I agree with @Diane Faye Zerr about the swash. Tweaked the bobby pin instead (I feel like its too much space to leave blank). Smacked K and G around a bit too, but they can probably use some fine tuning. Anyway, feels like its almost there...
over 1 year ago
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