Top left - a bit hard to read, and I see the 'I' in the negative space. I know what you're going for with this one, but I don't think it's working at all.
Bottom right - works well, and definitely more legible than the others.
But, I really like what you tried to do in the first one with the negative space. Maybe it's worth exploring again, maybe using a shape of a brick, maybe using other negative spaces within the letterforms, etc?
The bottom right seems the best because is very different from the others, but the one in the top right is very clean, istitutional and the concept of brick is clearer
i like the top right but i'm afraid it's already been done before. bottom right is great, and the vertical "RBC" works nicely as well. maybe try to align the period with the I a little more, looks awesome!!
I love the idea of the bottom right. Perhaps, for an icon, you could make a solid red brick with an 'R' cut-out or pressed into it. and then type out the whole word 'redbrick' beside or below. Great work, textures, balance, font & direction.
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Continued logo exploration, what one you guys think has more potential to keep going? Thanks!!
12 months ago
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Nikita Prokhorov
Top left - a bit hard to read, and I see the 'I' in the negative space. I know what you're going for with this one, but I don't think it's working at all.
Top right - http://www.bigsmack.tv/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2011/05/chevy01.jpg
Bottom left - hard to read.
Bottom right - works well, and definitely more legible than the others.
But, I really like what you tried to do in the first one with the negative space. Maybe it's worth exploring again, maybe using a shape of a brick, maybe using other negative spaces within the letterforms, etc?
12 months ago
@Nikita Prokhorov Hey thanks for all that! Helps a lot :)
12 months ago
I like the first one!
12 months ago
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Alex Kurchin Hattomonkey
Bottom right!
12 months ago
Bottom left type, maybe you could take the icon down with the type or try with the original icon. Love the colors!
12 months ago
The type on the bottom left plus a simple icon instead of what you have now = win
12 months ago
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Mattox Shuler
I'm digging the bottom right...
12 months ago
top right (winner)
bottom right (runner up)
12 months ago
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Oleg Glauzer
Bottom right, is better, i guess.
12 months ago
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Jorge Calvo
yeeah! bottom right rules.
12 months ago
bottom right is poweful
12 months ago
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Kyle O'Hara
I think the bottom right has the most potential. Also, looks like you could explore a more extended brand off of that option too.
12 months ago
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Kyle O'Hara
Maybe add arms to the "I" to provide a stronger balance.
12 months ago
The bottom right seems the best because is very different from the others, but the one in the top right is very clean, istitutional and the concept of brick is clearer
12 months ago
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Brendan Pittman
I'm digging the bottom right so far. I think top left has potential to be really nice, but the negative space needs some tweaking. Good work!
12 months ago
i like the top right but i'm afraid it's already been done before. bottom right is great, and the vertical "RBC" works nicely as well. maybe try to align the period with the I a little more, looks awesome!!
12 months ago
Thank you everyone for this feedback! Helps a lot, you're all using dribbble the right way :)
12 months ago
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Colin Campbell
The bottom right is definitely the strongest in my opinion, the "I" may need to scoot over a little. It's also my favorite. Great stuff here.
12 months ago
Bottom right is the strongest. Really nice exploration.
12 months ago
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Sem Tolentino
bottom right grabbed my attention straightaway
12 months ago
Bottom right is great!
12 months ago
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Skyler Westby
I love the idea of the bottom right. Perhaps, for an icon, you could make a solid red brick with an 'R' cut-out or pressed into it. and then type out the whole word 'redbrick' beside or below. Great work, textures, balance, font & direction.
12 months ago
Rebound
Rbc Logo
by Shannon Hatch
This was a total different spin on things. Still concept, project has probably turned into 'do whenever you have free time' kinda deal.
Unsure if it speaks building under construction or not.
8 months ago