Yeah I think if you bring that line coming off the 'v' up a little bit so it hits the 'a' right at the top that would help. Maybe bring the height of the 'l' up a bit too? Since it's sitting next to the 'e' it might help it read a little better. I really dig it though. Awesome work.
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Jordan Mahaffey
Working on some hand drawn stuff for Cloudy Clothing.
Here is a little bigger image, http://grab.by/e1DQ
12 months ago
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Jeff Jenkins
Dig the style! I read this as 'Elenate' though. I think it's the soft transition coming off the 'v.'
12 months ago
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Whitney CPBG
I read it the same as @Jeff Jenkins, but other than that I love it! The flow is quite organic, I think.
12 months ago
Yeah I think if you bring that line coming off the 'v' up a little bit so it hits the 'a' right at the top that would help. Maybe bring the height of the 'l' up a bit too? Since it's sitting next to the 'e' it might help it read a little better. I really dig it though. Awesome work.
12 months ago
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Jordan Mahaffey
Thanks guys! I appreciate the feedback. Ill definitely give those a run.
12 months ago
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