Benjamin, our children will have eyes of beautiful colors.
I'd change the pencil's perspective to be in the same plane as the book, and show some depth with the ribbon in either having it change direction due to gravity, or having it twist towards the viewer.
1. The page inside book, you show to us only the one corner, but there is should be another corner at the bottom.
2. Headband part of book needs more space.
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Benjamin Nathan
Pff, finally done :) Please let me know what you think!
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12 months ago
Wow, awesome job! What's it for?
12 months ago
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Morgan Carmont
The colors are amazing Benjamin. Love it!
12 months ago
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Jip
Really nice made!
12 months ago
That's amazin! Very clean.
12 months ago
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Haziq Mir
Oooh!
12 months ago
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Mateusz Dembek
Nice work ;) and i loooove this little bulb :)
12 months ago
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Marvin Kennis
Impressive work!
12 months ago
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Fabio Benedetti
@Benjamin Nathan Nice work Benjamin!
12 months ago
Superb work man! Maybe try a harder shadow for the pencil: http://cl.ly/3K2D1a021n0Z3u3E433R
Also, I found the hidden smiley :)
12 months ago
Awesome , but a pencil not lying on the book ... he is in a different plane..?
12 months ago
Very nice!
12 months ago
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Wil Nichols
Benjamin, our children will have eyes of beautiful colors.
I'd change the pencil's perspective to be in the same plane as the book, and show some depth with the ribbon in either having it change direction due to gravity, or having it twist towards the viewer.
12 months ago
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Prekesh Chavda
You're the best
12 months ago
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Benjamin Nathan
Thanks, guys! I'll definitely work on the perspective of the pencil next.
12 months ago
wow
12 months ago
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Andrea Cau
So clean. Beautiful work!
12 months ago
Why the book in the perspective, but pencil is not?
12 months ago
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Chris Masterson
Looks great, Benjamin! Love the little smiley face ;)
12 months ago
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Anna Marinenko
This book for best ideas only. Looks perfect.
12 months ago
Very nice icon. Love the pencil
12 months ago
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Zander Brade
I love the colour of the book. Great work dude:)
12 months ago
Lovely icon :)
But I have to add few things besides pencil perspective
just because you asking ;) http://cl.ly/1D1K0K0J11090I151t1G
1. The page inside book, you show to us only the one corner, but there is should be another corner at the bottom.
2. Headband part of book needs more space.
12 months ago
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Adam Fairhead
Great feel Ben. Nice work!
12 months ago
Just great. Bravo!
9 months ago