Bless Revisions

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1. Pro Dave Coleman

   Now I am trying fatter lines. Each of these still need plenty of work; they're super messy, but I think I like where they're going.

   12 months ago

2. Pro Helen Tran

   I like the last one the best!

   12 months ago

3. Shannon Hatch

   Like the 1st! Maybe just work on the stem of the B and you have it :)

   12 months ago

4. Claire Coullon

   Nice, I really like the overall shape of the middle right one. I don't think the 'B-l' connection works quite as well in this heavier weight though because it looks a little messy/busy. Would be curious to see a combination of the 'B' shape from top left with the 'less' of middle right. Either way though, coming along really nicely!

   11 months ago

5. Pro Dave Coleman

   Thanks for the feedback, @Claire Coullon, I really appreciate it; definitely going to try that!

   11 months ago

6. Jonny Delap

   Really dig the middle left! Great work @Dave!!

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   11 months ago

7. Bless Concept So this is the latest on Bless. Critique very welcome. Please let me know if colours look whack, as I'm working on a crappy old stand-in monitor, and it's pr...

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   Bless Concept

   by Dave Coleman

   So this is the latest on Bless. Critique very welcome. Please let me know if colours look whack, as I'm working on a crappy old stand-in monitor, and it's probably lying to me!

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   10 months ago