Yaloha Logo - Presentation

7 Responses

1. Jeff Jenkins

   Made a few almost imperceptible adjustments, and it's a wrap.

   about 1 year ago

2. Claire Coullon

   Really nice. Love how the 'y' and 'h' reflect each other, beautiful touch. The word has a great feel/sound to it too!

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   about 1 year ago

3. Félix Péault

   nice try, but i think the o is not natural, broken... maybe if you make a complete circle it shoud be good!

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   about 1 year ago

4. Jeff Jenkins

   @Claire Coullon Thanks Claire :)

   about 1 year ago

5. Jeff Jenkins

   @Félix Péault I appreciate your opinion, but I disagree. It is a natural way to write an 'o.' I've never seen a handwritten 'o' that has a perfect join at the top.

   about 1 year ago

6. Félix Péault

   @Jeff Jenkins oh yes, totally, but in this case, i think this is too jerky. Maybe if you assume it a little bit more in the letter drawing, it would be more natural. In an other case, because the writing is very clean and vectorized, i think it would won some quality
   this is just my opinion, i like your work anyway ;)

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   about 1 year ago

7. Jeff Jenkins

   @Félix Péault Okay, thanks for the follow-up comment. I understand your point of view better now. During the design process I considered making it a complete circle, but decided against it. Although the letterforms are clean and smooth, I think they have an organic feel to them, so I went with the 'o' you see here. Plus I didn't want it to look too much like an off-the-shelf font ;)

   about 1 year ago