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Caltrain Rebound #2

by Mark Otto Sep 26, 2010
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Shot_1285457275_teaser Caltrain Rebound First rebound of the Caltrain icon and I think I'm liking the change in direction. The perspective is much better here and I think the visual feels much more... September 25, 2010

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Caltrain Rebound

by Mark Otto

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  1. Cropped-hell-yeah Mark Otto

    And with the second rebound, I think I'm on the right track (no pun intended). Cleaned up a lot of lines and simplified things since the last iteration. I really dig this one.

    Need to work on the lights, the window shield, and the top a bit—any suggestions are much appreciated—but otherwise, I'm stoked with this pass :D.

    over 1 year ago

  2. Biopic-erica Erica Schoonmaker

    This one is definitely my favorite so far, I love seeing the progression you're going through with it! Keep it up.

    likes

    over 1 year ago

  3. 5831605458_30f7fb8dba_o Eric Ritchey

    I agree with @Erica - definitely my fave so far. Based on the image linked in the first go 'round it seems like the nose of the train could appear more ... pointy(?)

    over 1 year ago

  4. Apple-touch-icon Luke Dorny

    Amazing, sir.
    More? windshield wipers? train number? shiny metal bits?

    over 1 year ago

  5. Boat Joseph Wain

    The silhouette in the window helps add a bit of dimension in just the right spot. Props!

    over 1 year ago

  6. Pro Dsc_0263 Sergio Alvarez

    My favorite is the first one Mark. I wonder how it would look with the silhouette inside!

    over 1 year ago

  7. Pro Untitled-1 Jeff Broderick

    Great work man. I was actually doing something like this a few days ago. With a couple more details and some more shading I think you will have a fantastic icon on your hands!

    over 1 year ago

  8. Cropped-hell-yeah Mark Otto

    Right on, thanks for the feedback everyone. Definitely need to work on the details and more realistic shading. Will rebound when I have something!

    over 1 year ago

  9. Cropped-hell-yeah

    Shot_1285564068_teaser Caltrain Rebound #3 And another rebound to focus on some of the shading and textures. I think one more pass will do it to fix up the nose and the lights (which are pretty much u... September 27, 2010

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    Caltrain Rebound #3

    by Mark Otto

    And another rebound to focus on some of the shading and textures. I think one more pass will do it to fix up the nose and the lights (which are pretty much untouched in this round).

    over 1 year ago

  10. Pro Avatar 2011 Paul Lloyd

    Hmm, compared to your final rebound, this does look more like the Baby Bullet. All versions look smashing, but this one feels closer in style to an actual Caltrain train (if that was your intention).

    over 1 year ago

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