Blimp update is right on. The colors tend to get a bit washed out, though which isn't a bad thing at all when it's the palette you're working with, but I think when you've got a couple objects that are minuscule in comparison to, say, the vast expanse of the sky, try and make sure you create visual anchors with them. That could be easily achieved by upping the contrast. Also, if there's a different color of sky coming in from the top left, make sure that color is heavier on the edges of all the objects as the light is meeting with the subject's surface. Maybe try a bit more visual interest in the skyline and I think you've got a great piece!
3 Responses
Pro
Andrew Terpening
The blimp has been updated to better fit the image.
Full view: http://aspecteleven.com/wips/drawings/building_1_2.png
12 months ago
Pro
Justin Mezzell
Blimp update is right on. The colors tend to get a bit washed out, though which isn't a bad thing at all when it's the palette you're working with, but I think when you've got a couple objects that are minuscule in comparison to, say, the vast expanse of the sky, try and make sure you create visual anchors with them. That could be easily achieved by upping the contrast. Also, if there's a different color of sky coming in from the top left, make sure that color is heavier on the edges of all the objects as the light is meeting with the subject's surface. Maybe try a bit more visual interest in the skyline and I think you've got a great piece!
12 months ago
Pro
Andrew Terpening
@Justin Mezzell Awesome! Thanks for the suggestions, I'll see what I can do to implement them!
12 months ago