We're adding finishing touches to this icon before pixel perfect down scaling. Any suggestions for improvement? (The color, slot at the top and clock have to stay)
I'm not too fond of the gloss over the clock; doesn't seem to match the overall lighting. I agree with @Kyle Welsby that it's a bit *too* clean at the moment. I know it's the Yummygum way, but a subtle texture on the blue material would go a long way.
And for realism's sake (not too sure about this one, though): wouldn't you insert the paper upside down in real-life?
EDIT: I'm missing some definition in this area as well: http://cl.ly/GyUP
@Max Steenbergen@Kevin Anderson@Ray Faustino Thanks for the texture suggestion guys, really good point. There's already some, but we should probably make it stronger. Although the client wanted the clocks surface to be clean, he might be open to it :).
@Alan Horne Yeah, we thought about that. We'll see what our client thinks about that idea. Thanks
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Yummygum
We're adding finishing touches to this icon before pixel perfect down scaling. Any suggestions for improvement? (The color, slot at the top and clock have to stay)
12 months ago
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Emiel Janson
Grrrrrr!!!! Love it.
12 months ago
It's too clean for a dusty old analogue punch clock.
#justsayin
12 months ago
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Yummygum
@Emiel Janson Haha thanks
@Kyle Welsby Good point, thanks!
PS. Someone just pointed us at the red punched not being in the middle.
12 months ago
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Max Steenbergen
I'm not too fond of the gloss over the clock; doesn't seem to match the overall lighting. I agree with @Kyle Welsby that it's a bit *too* clean at the moment. I know it's the Yummygum way, but a subtle texture on the blue material would go a long way.
And for realism's sake (not too sure about this one, though): wouldn't you insert the paper upside down in real-life?
EDIT: I'm missing some definition in this area as well: http://cl.ly/GyUP
12 months ago
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Joel Helin
Absolutely fucking awesome, guys!
12 months ago
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Alan Horne
My only thing I remember about punch in machines was that it was card and not a floppy bit of paper.
Still looks awesome though.
12 months ago
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Kevin Anderson
Love it fellas!
Althought I have to agree with @Max Steenbergen and @Kyle Welsby on the "making it old" stuff. For the rest, top notch!
12 months ago
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Yoga Perdana
wow!
12 months ago
Great as always guys! However I agree with the texture argument as well.
12 months ago
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Joost van der Ree
Really nice!
12 months ago
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Yummygum
@Max Steenbergen @Kevin Anderson @Ray Faustino Thanks for the texture suggestion guys, really good point. There's already some, but we should probably make it stronger. Although the client wanted the clocks surface to be clean, he might be open to it :).
@Alan Horne Yeah, we thought about that. We'll see what our client thinks about that idea. Thanks
12 months ago
"Any suggestions for improvement?"
Hmm, Well, One thing, The.. Hmm. f**k. It's perfect for me :)
12 months ago
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Husam Yousef
V. Nice
12 months ago
great , I loved!
12 months ago
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Gil
these are some quality pixels mate!
12 months ago
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Muhammad Ali Effendy
Nice!
12 months ago
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Anna Marinenko
Wonderful
12 months ago
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Damian Hernandez
Love the colors, and the textures. Good work @Yummygum
12 months ago
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Yummygum
@Andrey S. Rodrigues @sowanna @Andrey S. Rodrigues @Damian Hernandez @Muhammad Ali Effendy @Gil thanks guys n gall!
@ThisIsUI Haha, thanks man!
12 months ago
Nice, but i agree with @Alan Horne and @Kyle Welsby
12 months ago
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Asif Aleem
mind-blowing
12 months ago
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Robert van Klinken
holy f*** serious yo!
12 months ago
Rebound
Updated punch clock icon
by Yummygum
Added a rougher texture without making the icon look muddy. Thanks again for that suggestion on the previous shot guys!
Also did some more work on the glass and numbers. Please Check out the attached image to see a side by side comparison.
12 months ago
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leef
Good job
9 months ago