EP - "P" Serif

12 Responses

1. Pro Erin Potter

   So @Henric Sjösten made a comment about nudging the serif in on the "P." I just wanted to get some opinions. Reference my previous shot for a comparison.

   12 months ago

2. Chris Beaumont

   Looks a lot more balanced than the previous one, good move

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   12 months ago

3. Pro Jake Mize

   Yeah, I was going to drop a note on the other about shortening the serif on the P. Looks good Erin!

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   12 months ago

4. Pro Erin Potter

   Thanks fellas.

   12 months ago

5. Pro Henric Sjösten

   Great ;)
   I think you could even go as far as aligning it with the right side of the stem of the E, ifyaknowwhaddamsayin?

   12 months ago

6. Pro Erin Potter

   @Henric Sjösten You know I did that but decided to split the difference because this looked a smidge more balanced to me.

   Your wisdom has been beneficial none-the-less. :)

   12 months ago

7. Pro Henric Sjösten

   I dont like editing guys work out of respect, but since you seem to be cool with my input, I did a thing to show what I'm thinking :)

   Not only making the P look more like a P, I also like how it adds to the diagonal balance that is made by the positioning of the letters.

   http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8658061/epred.jpg

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   12 months ago

8. Pro Erin Potter

   @Henric Sjösten I'm a sponge. I'll listen to what others have to say. It would be different if you were not being constructive.

   I love all advice/input I can get

   12 months ago

9. Pro Henric Sjösten

   Cool! :)

   In that case, have you tried making the vertical lines just a little bit thicker? They tend to look a bit thinner then the horizontal lines.

   12 months ago

10. Claire Coullon

    I really like this Erin, the composition feels so compact and distinctive. Absolutely love how the 'P' bowl 'points' back into the middle of the 'E', creates a nice sense of movement. I agree with @Henric on the weight of the verticals, just to compensate for the natural optical illusion.

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    12 months ago

11. Pro Sean Glass

    That is great. You could put it on a hat.

    9 months ago

12. Adam Johnson

    Love this mark!!

    2 months ago