Looks good @Kyle! I love it. The irregularities give it character. Only thing I would take a look at is the counter of the 'a', its stress is a little off and the curves/size look a bit awkward, resulting in some weight issues (the thinnest point is too thick, compare to 'u' and 'n'). Looking good! This will look great on signs and such. The brush-style "BAKERY" looks awesome! Well, now I've written a novel - hope it's helpful haha!
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Kyle Anthony Miller
Working on some stuff for a bakery here in LA.
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12 months ago
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Joseph Alessio
Looks good @Kyle! I love it. The irregularities give it character. Only thing I would take a look at is the counter of the 'a', its stress is a little off and the curves/size look a bit awkward, resulting in some weight issues (the thinnest point is too thick, compare to 'u' and 'n'). Looking good! This will look great on signs and such. The brush-style "BAKERY" looks awesome! Well, now I've written a novel - hope it's helpful haha!
12 months ago
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Emir Ayouni
THIS!
12 months ago
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Mani
nice!
12 months ago
great shot!
12 months ago