* wTP
* This organization works with kids. Adults and kids are involved.
I dig the integration of the letterforms into the figures, but I'll be honest - I didn't see the middle of the 'w' as the head at first. It looked a bit headless. I'm sure it has to do with the head on the right figure being the dark blue vs white.
I'm not sure what the organization does (meaning I don't know if this suggestion is a good fit or not), but I want to see what it'd look like with an imperfect circle. Giving it a humanistic feel similar to the letters and figures. That could also make it feel too childish - so there's that.
* WTP - Correct!
* Works with kids, adults and kids involved - Correct!
This organization works with parents, teachers, and students to identify the biggest health/wellness issue facing their community, and then develop a curriculum that addresses it.
Imperfect circle is definitely on the list of "stuff to try".
I'll see what I can do about the child figure appearing headless :)
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Prototyping a logo, feedback welcome.
So, tell me:
* What 3 letters do you see?
* What does this organization do, and who is involved?
over 1 year ago
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Matt Crest
* wTP
* This organization works with kids. Adults and kids are involved.
I dig the integration of the letterforms into the figures, but I'll be honest - I didn't see the middle of the 'w' as the head at first. It looked a bit headless. I'm sure it has to do with the head on the right figure being the dark blue vs white.
I'm not sure what the organization does (meaning I don't know if this suggestion is a good fit or not), but I want to see what it'd look like with an imperfect circle. Giving it a humanistic feel similar to the letters and figures. That could also make it feel too childish - so there's that.
So...what is this organization? What do they do?
over 1 year ago
* WTP - Correct!
* Works with kids, adults and kids involved - Correct!
This organization works with parents, teachers, and students to identify the biggest health/wellness issue facing their community, and then develop a curriculum that addresses it.
Imperfect circle is definitely on the list of "stuff to try".
I'll see what I can do about the child figure appearing headless :)
Thanks for the feedback!
over 1 year ago
Pro
Matt Crest
Sounds like a really cool organization. And needed.
What if the 'w' had an open loop in the middle for a head, which was filled with dark blue?
over 1 year ago
ooh, like that idea - it actually looks like that in my paper sketches - will post rebound.
over 1 year ago