Love the glass treatment/colour, but the background puts too much into the shot, I think. Simplify the background and maybe even reduce the number of hues used in the glass (meaning a custom colour palette rather than a conventional rainbow) to make it stronger. Otherwise, great!
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Zach Forrester
Took another pass at my logo. Thoughts?
PS: Background image is from the very talented http://fiftyfootshadows.net with some modification on my end.
about 1 year ago
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Zach Forrester
I'm thinking I need more shading on the bottom of the top arm on the f. Not enough contrast.
about 1 year ago
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Ali
Looks awesome!
about 1 year ago
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Umar Irshad
Zach, I love this!!!
about 1 year ago
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Zach Forrester
Thanks!
about 1 year ago
Looks great Zach :D
about 1 year ago
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Scott Jensen
I agree with you about the 'F' Zach. Especially looking at how it gets reduced in your Avatar... it starts to lose its readability.
Aside from that, I'm really really digging this. Nice work!
about 1 year ago
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Zach Forrester
Thanks @Scott Jensen @Coen van Hasselt
Think I've already fixed the F issue. Will rebound soon.
about 1 year ago
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Gianni Chiappetta
MADNESS! I love this! You have gone all out for this one. I love the glass.
about 1 year ago
Love the glass treatment/colour, but the background puts too much into the shot, I think. Simplify the background and maybe even reduce the number of hues used in the glass (meaning a custom colour palette rather than a conventional rainbow) to make it stronger. Otherwise, great!
about 1 year ago
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Zach Forrester
@Adam W. King Thanks for the great feedback! I'll be rebounding soon with some tweaks.
about 1 year ago
Some bad ass lighting ;) Well done!
12 months ago