Firestarter

Firestarter

12 Responses

  1. Pro Greg Christman Greg Christman

    One of many options for a logo. Still a WIP but it's for a company that has to do with bus gps installations.

    Is the kerning ok on this? Sometimes I just can't tell from staring at it too long.

    about 1 year ago

  2. Pro Jakob Haglof Jakob Haglof

    Looks alright. Like the colors and that grey is used instead of black.

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    about 1 year ago

  3. Pro Lennart Breel Lennart Breel

    Looks very nice!

    Kerning seems fine, a nice trick for kerning is to turn the design upside down, giving you a fresh perspective and stopping the language part of your brain from interfering :)

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    about 1 year ago

  4. Steven Schroeder Steven Schroeder

    I think the kerning is a bit off. such as the r to d is much tighter than the g to y. same with the r. Just little things.

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    about 1 year ago

  5. Pro Lennart Breel Lennart Breel

    If the o was as thin as the rest of the letters, the kerning would be perfect, and I think legibility is better this way, keeping the kerning as if the o were thin. :)

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    about 1 year ago

  6. Pro James Olstein James Olstein

    Your spacing is rad. A!
    I'm now giving letter grades with all dribble comments.

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    about 1 year ago

  7. Pro Michael Norcross Michael Norcross

    Breathe the pressure. Come play my game Ill test ya. Psychosomatic addict insane. Great work bro!

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    about 1 year ago

  8. Pro Jake Fleming Jake Fleming

    hmmm...not the most inspired design. I agree that the kerning is off. Is there something you can do to convey a location other than this overused marker?

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    about 1 year ago

  9. Pro Greg Christman Greg Christman

    @Jake Fleming Tell me how you really feel.

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    about 1 year ago

  10. Pro Jake Fleming Jake Fleming

    Already have. Love all your other stuff, that's why this one surprised me.

    about 1 year ago

  11. Pro Gert van Duinen Gert van Duinen

    Lennard is right, I used that trick almost 15 years now and it almost never played tricks on me. Another trick I have been using for some time is to print and / or view it both very large and very very small. Particularly the latter works best in my cases.

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    about 1 year ago

  12. Pro Greg Christman Greg Christman

    Thanks for the tips everyone! Sometimes it's still just nice to have a fresh pair of eyes.

    about 1 year ago

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