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  1. Charlie via Issland. Charlie via Issland.

    Hello guys,

    I'm currently working on this super simple mark for travel agency :) tell me what you think and what you see :)

    about 1 year ago

  2. Pro Huig van der Waal Huig van der Waal

    Beautiful sunset above the ocean :)

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    about 1 year ago

  3. Pro Jovan Petrić Jovan Petrić

    Sun, ocean and maybe ice cream.

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    about 1 year ago

  4. Pro Thom Thom

    Sun and Water. Though one thing's not right here; when the sun shines on the water (at sunset), the water turns orange/red. But the water in your mark is just blue. Though, I really dig the concept and I love your work. Keep up the good work man! ;)

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    about 1 year ago

  5. Charlie via Issland. Charlie via Issland.

    @Thom Yeah I know it mate, but it doesn't feels right when I tried it, because there is no feeling of water and sun, just a sun with some lines, you know :)

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    about 1 year ago

  6. Pro John Long John Long

    I think it works great. I picked it up at first glace. Nice

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    about 1 year ago

  7. Stanislav Kaluža Stanislav Kaluža

    I'm sure I've seen similar motive on some Czech travel agency before. Cool execution tho...

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    about 1 year ago

  8. Pro Haziq Mir Haziq Mir

    DAT SUNSET!

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    about 1 year ago

  9. Pro Rich Baird Rich Baird

    Indeed it's simple, I suspect you will need to surround it with something a little more communicative and distinctive (the sun and sea motif is a familiar device in this industry). What are their key propositions? Are they low budget, all-inclusive, family or couple orientated, focused on specific destinations etc, at the moment I'm just getting the holiday vibe but little else.

    Have you considered approaching the other assets first? Perhaps looking at how you might present holiday photography (this is a major sell in travel agencies) in a way that breaks from industry conventions.

    As for this asset, have you considered resolving the sea within the circle created by the sun?

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    about 1 year ago

  10. Pro Hans Jørgen Wærner Hans Jørgen Wærner

    lovely!

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    about 1 year ago

  11. Pro Christopher Magruder Christopher Magruder

    money.

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    about 1 year ago

  12. Charlie via Issland. Charlie via Issland.

    @Rich Baird Yes Rich, as I said, it's just a simple concept for now :) every other concepts are depending on taste of client, but for now, they looking just for a super simple and iconic logo that mention travel and all that sun feeling from it :)

    about 1 year ago

  13. Mike DeLeon Mike DeLeon

    Love it man, fits perfectly.

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    about 1 year ago

  14. Petr Stepanek Petr Stepanek

    Lightbulb O_o

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    about 1 year ago

  15. Pro Kat Rebac Kat Rebac

    I think it works great, got me thinking about a holiday straight away. nice :)

    about 1 year ago

  16. Pro Petr Široký Petr Široký

    Přeci jen bych obětoval symetrii a víc protáhnul vodu. Když se ohlédnu do reality, tak moře musí vždy přesahovat slunce, jinak se mi to nevybavuje.

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    about 1 year ago

  17. Pro Charles Patterson Charles Patterson

    Half a mango in a blue glass bowl? That reminds me of holidays! I'm messing, it looks really good and i totally get the right feel from it.

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    about 1 year ago

  18. Sascha Geisler Sascha Geisler

    You need perfect typography alongside that logo and much white space. Otherwise it will quickly move from super-simple to cheap-looking.

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    about 1 year ago

  19. Pro Ben Bate ⚒ Ben Bate ⚒

    An egg in an egg cup :)

    Nah, looks great Charlie. Really nice and simple.

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    about 1 year ago

  20. Pro Colin Tierney Colin Tierney

    missed this one charlie...love me some simplicity.

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    about 1 year ago

  21. Pro Fixx Design (via Darren Lee) Fixx Design (via Darren Lee)

    You managed to portray an ocean with just 3 solid lines. Now that's really neat.

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    9 months ago

  22. Mladen Mladen

    It's a sunrise but not a sunset because the water is blue and not red

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    4 months ago

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