Sun and Water. Though one thing's not right here; when the sun shines on the water (at sunset), the water turns orange/red. But the water in your mark is just blue. Though, I really dig the concept and I love your work. Keep up the good work man! ;)
@Thom Yeah I know it mate, but it doesn't feels right when I tried it, because there is no feeling of water and sun, just a sun with some lines, you know :)
Indeed it's simple, I suspect you will need to surround it with something a little more communicative and distinctive (the sun and sea motif is a familiar device in this industry). What are their key propositions? Are they low budget, all-inclusive, family or couple orientated, focused on specific destinations etc, at the moment I'm just getting the holiday vibe but little else.
Have you considered approaching the other assets first? Perhaps looking at how you might present holiday photography (this is a major sell in travel agencies) in a way that breaks from industry conventions.
As for this asset, have you considered resolving the sea within the circle created by the sun?
@Rich Baird Yes Rich, as I said, it's just a simple concept for now :) every other concepts are depending on taste of client, but for now, they looking just for a super simple and iconic logo that mention travel and all that sun feeling from it :)
22 Responses
Hello guys,
I'm currently working on this super simple mark for travel agency :) tell me what you think and what you see :)
about 1 year ago
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Huig van der Waal
Beautiful sunset above the ocean :)
about 1 year ago
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Jovan Petrić
Sun, ocean and maybe ice cream.
about 1 year ago
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Thom
Sun and Water. Though one thing's not right here; when the sun shines on the water (at sunset), the water turns orange/red. But the water in your mark is just blue. Though, I really dig the concept and I love your work. Keep up the good work man! ;)
about 1 year ago
@Thom Yeah I know it mate, but it doesn't feels right when I tried it, because there is no feeling of water and sun, just a sun with some lines, you know :)
about 1 year ago
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John Long
I think it works great. I picked it up at first glace. Nice
about 1 year ago
I'm sure I've seen similar motive on some Czech travel agency before. Cool execution tho...
about 1 year ago
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Haziq Mir
DAT SUNSET!
about 1 year ago
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Rich Baird
Indeed it's simple, I suspect you will need to surround it with something a little more communicative and distinctive (the sun and sea motif is a familiar device in this industry). What are their key propositions? Are they low budget, all-inclusive, family or couple orientated, focused on specific destinations etc, at the moment I'm just getting the holiday vibe but little else.
Have you considered approaching the other assets first? Perhaps looking at how you might present holiday photography (this is a major sell in travel agencies) in a way that breaks from industry conventions.
As for this asset, have you considered resolving the sea within the circle created by the sun?
about 1 year ago
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Hans Jørgen Wærner
lovely!
about 1 year ago
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Christopher Magruder
money.
about 1 year ago
@Rich Baird Yes Rich, as I said, it's just a simple concept for now :) every other concepts are depending on taste of client, but for now, they looking just for a super simple and iconic logo that mention travel and all that sun feeling from it :)
about 1 year ago
Love it man, fits perfectly.
about 1 year ago
Lightbulb O_o
about 1 year ago
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Kat Rebac
I think it works great, got me thinking about a holiday straight away. nice :)
about 1 year ago
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Petr Široký
Přeci jen bych obětoval symetrii a víc protáhnul vodu. Když se ohlédnu do reality, tak moře musí vždy přesahovat slunce, jinak se mi to nevybavuje.
about 1 year ago
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Charles Patterson
Half a mango in a blue glass bowl? That reminds me of holidays! I'm messing, it looks really good and i totally get the right feel from it.
about 1 year ago
You need perfect typography alongside that logo and much white space. Otherwise it will quickly move from super-simple to cheap-looking.
about 1 year ago
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Ben Bate ⚒
An egg in an egg cup :)
Nah, looks great Charlie. Really nice and simple.
about 1 year ago
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Colin Tierney
missed this one charlie...love me some simplicity.
about 1 year ago
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Fixx Design (via Darren Lee)
You managed to portray an ocean with just 3 solid lines. Now that's really neat.
9 months ago
It's a sunrise but not a sunset because the water is blue and not red
4 months ago