Working on something - really kicking my butt right now. The "with a" seems off, along with the overall layout. Would really appreciate some feedback / suggestions. :D
Nice job dude, I know what you mean about the "with a". Maybe try putting the "with a" on the top left side? and moving the globe headphones down to the bottom left next to "tour". Still keeping the "with a" inside the black box around "mission". Hope that made sense? haha either way still love this piece.
Love this...I like Sam's idea. Also, what if you did what Sam suggested by putting "with a" on top left of "MISSION" and put the globe with headphones in place of the "O" in MISSION? As I'm sure we all do, I have love hate relationship with balance.
Thanks for the suggestions guys, but the idea got scrapped. This was another comp that got developed further. Working on the poster now. Will upload full version soon!
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Working on something - really kicking my butt right now. The "with a" seems off, along with the overall layout. Would really appreciate some feedback / suggestions. :D
about 1 year ago
Pro
Sam Rolli
Nice job dude, I know what you mean about the "with a". Maybe try putting the "with a" on the top left side? and moving the globe headphones down to the bottom left next to "tour". Still keeping the "with a" inside the black box around "mission". Hope that made sense? haha either way still love this piece.
about 1 year ago
Love this...I like Sam's idea. Also, what if you did what Sam suggested by putting "with a" on top left of "MISSION" and put the globe with headphones in place of the "O" in MISSION? As I'm sure we all do, I have love hate relationship with balance.
about 1 year ago
Rebound
Round 2
by Adam Swisher
Thanks for the suggestions guys, but the idea got scrapped. This was another comp that got developed further. Working on the poster now. Will upload full version soon!
about 1 year ago