Looks pretty good. I want to say that the type feels like it needs to be integrated more into the design. Right now it is sitting on top, but I wonder if it would more effective if it were part of the background? Background is a bit dirty/textured, maybe the type should be too?
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Jeff Brown
Here's a seal and lock up for a trip this fall. This is basically a refresh from last years. Any advice to take it to the next level this year?
about 1 year ago
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Colin D. Pritchard
Looks pretty good. I want to say that the type feels like it needs to be integrated more into the design. Right now it is sitting on top, but I wonder if it would more effective if it were part of the background? Background is a bit dirty/textured, maybe the type should be too?
about 1 year ago