I am working on my adopted sis's wedding invite, this logo will be made into stamps for everything and be on the front of their invite. I am not sure if the "and" is in the right place? also love to hear what I can do to make this the best it can be! As always comments & feedback are most welcomed! Thx!!
about 1 year ago
Hey Mike, nice sketch! In my opinion the "and" is in the right place and looks good. If you want to try something out you could use a nice ampersand instead of the "and".
I agree with @Thorsten Beeck ^^ it looks great! but an ampersand night make things easier. its worth a try?
Wow @Mike, I love it! I might put the "and" a little more snugly up to the N-B connection. Really loving the swashes and ligatures!
@Thorsten Beeck, @Grace Marie Bienek, @Joseph Alessio So if I do an ampersand would y'all keep it where the "and" is or put it on the right side? Thanks again for the feedback and props! Much appreciated!!
I think the way you type in southern is boss. I'd go right side. Balancing the N+B with a connecting amper.
An ampersand would probably go better on the right, since the left is visually heavier at the moment and there's more going on there. The "and" fits perfectly where it is but I think the shape of the ampersand wouldn't fit so well in that spot.
Hate it. It will turn out terrible. Lol. Jk. Awesome.
I like it with 'and', and where it's at already.
Looking great. The N is killer
@Ced Funches lol! I type like I talk bro! I think that is the route I am going to try. thx bro!
@Joseph Alessio seems like that is the general feeling! thx bro!
@Lange Creative lmao! That's what's up!
@Mike Jones - I would personally keep the ampersand in the same spot, but you would definatly have to play with sizing and the weight distribution to make it look intentionally (like an ampersand and not get hidden by the other loopy swirls). but it definatly would simplify things because you could size it up a bit instead of having a small "and". good luck with it :)
@Grace Marie Bienek thanks yo! Will try both. And post more when I get it vectored out.
Great ligatures, let's see the vector version.
@Rudy Hurtado Global Branding thanks bro! I am also trying to decide whether or not to pull the dot from the "i" from the "e" or the "t"??
I really love this type. It looks amazing. I agree with previous comments, in that an ampersand would look best visually on the right side. It would really add more to the design in my opinion.
@Caitlin McEvoy Word! and thx!!
Amazing Mike! The 'N' and 'B' ligatures are crazy, cool.
@Jeff Finley & @Jeremiah Wingett Thanks fellas!!
Looks great, except the "rent" sits too high for me.
Beautiful. Look forward to seeing this as a vector!
It should be an ampersand technically (when addressing a couple) - but is it even needed?
@Dan (Hypagraphic) Ah....so maybe bring it down to 'bout middle of the "B"??
@Matthew D. Kenyon I did not know that! Learned something new. Thx bro!!
Really nice, Mike! Can't wait to see the vector version.
Really nice man.
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