this is quite a bit better than the previous, god job. some places still need work though. looks like the tail is just a little too small. i dont like that stroke in the top fin, i think it should follow the spines that are actually there and come off the back.
Very nicely done so far. Only suggestion I have is that the area around the eye is becoming a little too cluttered. May possibly be resolved with just thinner strokes, but see where you can go with it :)
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Fabio Benedetti
@Matt Willcox lovely logo Matt, great work ++
about 1 year ago
Nice improvement, good work.
about 1 year ago
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Nick Slater
AWESOME!
about 1 year ago
Very professional looking mark.
about 1 year ago
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Brandon Moore
this is quite a bit better than the previous, god job. some places still need work though. looks like the tail is just a little too small. i dont like that stroke in the top fin, i think it should follow the spines that are actually there and come off the back.
about 1 year ago
Very nicely done so far. Only suggestion I have is that the area around the eye is becoming a little too cluttered. May possibly be resolved with just thinner strokes, but see where you can go with it :)
about 1 year ago
Huge improvement, Matt! You've definitely succeeded in giving it some much needed character.
about 1 year ago
nice update. I love the thick lines
about 1 year ago