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22 Responses
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Mike Bruner
early concept direction.
about 1 year ago
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Joshua Krohn
Not fond of Maven Pro. But that's a clever-as-heck mark. Don't know if it needs the halftone underbelly.
about 1 year ago
I enjoy a lot the type combination and the mark looks great but I agree with Joshua, for me the halftone underbelly is too much. Nice job!
about 1 year ago
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Ryan Ford
Agreed with everyone. Underbelly detail is superfluous. DELETE.
about 1 year ago
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Mike Bruner
@Joshua Krohn , @Zinegraph and @Ryan Ford thanks for the feed back. Yeah the halftone may be an over kill, just wanting to stay in the printing fell while maintaining the robin's coloring.
interesting. good things to think about, thank you for taking the time to comment, helps.
about 1 year ago
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Mike Bruner
Made a change to the halftone underbelly. check it out.
I do believe it did clean it up a bit. THX Joshua.
http://dribbble.com/shots/549100-The-Print-Robin/attachments/40564
Check it out and let me know. cheers.
about 1 year ago
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Ryan Ford
@Mike Bruner The newer underbelly is good in solid red.
about 1 year ago
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Mike Bruner
@Ryan Ford THX! nice feedback.
about 1 year ago
Totally like the cleaner version of this!! Love the type!
about 1 year ago
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Jeff Jenkins
Looks like I'm in the minority, but I like the halftone version. I agree about the type. I think it's the lowercase r that ruins it for me. Would be interesting to see the font customized with fully rounded r, b, and n.
about 1 year ago
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Nathan Walker
Solid first concept Mike. Lookin' forward to the others.
about 1 year ago
Like the attached version! Great concept!
about 1 year ago
awesome. I think you could even tilt the page/wing and it would still read well... or on the underside with it flipped.
about 1 year ago
Really nice, the robin has such a great shape! Can't pick between both versions for the halftone vs solid red though.. I like your type choice as well, I'd just suggest tightening up the spacing, especially as it's lower case. I think having it more compact would work well considering the horizontal composition.
about 1 year ago
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Garrett Godsey
Nice!
about 1 year ago
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Ronnie Sampson
Great concept.
about 1 year ago
fantastic
about 1 year ago
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Simon Frouws
= early success IMO! :-)
about 1 year ago
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Emir Ayouni
Mark looks solid, Mike.
Although I'm allergic to gradients. But w/o that it looks great.
I think Maven Pro actually works well here.
Not sure about Wisdom Script tho. I know it's design-snobbery, but it's such a overused font (even tho it's a fantastic one!) that it's seriously becoming the Comic Sans of Script type fonts.
about 1 year ago
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Florin Capota
nice concept Mike, also feel the type could be more tight.
about 1 year ago
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Jovan Petrić
Totally rad.
about 1 year ago
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Mike Bruner
Thanks for the great feedback on this concept direction, really appreciate it, big time.
I've attached another version making some of the suggested changes. tighter kerning and a slight change to the Wisdom font.
check it out. http://dribbble.com/shots/549100-The-Print-Robin/attachments/40773
Then its on to another concept direction. Thanks again for the critique!
about 1 year ago