I love to work on words. Just one word. And these days I kind of fell in love with "Cupcakes". And I was thinking of a good way to display it. And I quickly thought of the italian typography from the beginning of the 20th century.
This sketch is the first part of the process. Next is going to be vectorization.
@Luke Ritchie Thanks Luke, really appreciate your comment, especially coming from you
@Nacho I do agree. That is one of the parts I want to work on with Illustrator. There could be a curve between these two letters but the style on the first letters show a kind of 60° angle so I thought it would be better to continue that way. But still no sure about it. Second point is kerning. Maybe I should try to make it a little bit more tight.
Really nice (and great word choice!), the style works beautifully. I love the loop inside your 'C', it really leads your eye into it. I also love the little flick at the top of the 'k', it's a great touch.
I too agree with @Nacho about the 'k-e' area. I do really like the angled stroke, like you said it fits well with everything else – once you tighten the spacing there, it should really help. I think the 's' might be contributing to it looking a little strange too, it seems quite wide/thick compared to the 'C' for example. All the best with it and looking forward to the next step!
Lovely! I agree with you, I'd tighten up the "kes" a bit. The curl of the "C" seems a bit long, also. Just first impressions, this is looking really nice! I'm envious of your clean pencil skills :D
@Claire Coullon Thanks for your feedback. The more I see it the more I agree on these 3 last letters. I am going to try to apply your advice and see where it goes.
I would say the 'akes' are too wide compare to the other characters, so I would make the actual letterforms narrower, not just the kerning between them. That would help with the balance of the word a great deal. I think everything else was already covered by @Joseph Alessio, @Claire Coullon, @Nacho, and @Luke Ritchie.
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Francis Chouquet
I love to work on words. Just one word. And these days I kind of fell in love with "Cupcakes". And I was thinking of a good way to display it. And I quickly thought of the italian typography from the beginning of the 20th century.
This sketch is the first part of the process. Next is going to be vectorization.
about 1 year ago
Great. Waiting for vector version:) Keep on:)
about 1 year ago
Really nice Francis ! I really love it (like all your lettering).
Good luck for the next step :)
about 1 year ago
nice one.
Have fun with vectorisation :)
about 1 year ago
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Luke Ritchie
Love the stylo
about 1 year ago
This looks promising, I really like the k.
about 1 year ago
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saurabhj
slick...
about 1 year ago
Something in that k-e ligature is knocking me off.
about 1 year ago
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Francis Chouquet
@Christophe Hermann @Nicolas BIRCKEL @Forsuregraphic Thanks for your support. Sure vectorization is going the BIG part ! :)
@Luke Ritchie Thanks Luke, really appreciate your comment, especially coming from you
@Nacho I do agree. That is one of the parts I want to work on with Illustrator. There could be a curve between these two letters but the style on the first letters show a kind of 60° angle so I thought it would be better to continue that way. But still no sure about it. Second point is kerning. Maybe I should try to make it a little bit more tight.
about 1 year ago
Really nice (and great word choice!), the style works beautifully. I love the loop inside your 'C', it really leads your eye into it. I also love the little flick at the top of the 'k', it's a great touch.
I too agree with @Nacho about the 'k-e' area. I do really like the angled stroke, like you said it fits well with everything else – once you tighten the spacing there, it should really help. I think the 's' might be contributing to it looking a little strange too, it seems quite wide/thick compared to the 'C' for example. All the best with it and looking forward to the next step!
about 1 year ago
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Joseph Alessio
Lovely! I agree with you, I'd tighten up the "kes" a bit. The curl of the "C" seems a bit long, also. Just first impressions, this is looking really nice! I'm envious of your clean pencil skills :D
about 1 year ago
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Francis Chouquet
@Claire Coullon Thanks for your feedback. The more I see it the more I agree on these 3 last letters. I am going to try to apply your advice and see where it goes.
@Joseph Alessio Thanks for your support :)
about 1 year ago
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Nikita Prokhorov
That looks great @Francis Chouquet! So clean and good looking.
I would say the 'akes' are too wide compare to the other characters, so I would make the actual letterforms narrower, not just the kerning between them. That would help with the balance of the word a great deal. I think everything else was already covered by @Joseph Alessio, @Claire Coullon, @Nacho, and @Luke Ritchie.
about 1 year ago
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Francis Chouquet
@Nikita Prokhorov I will try to make it narrower too to see if it helps. Thanks for your feedback :)
about 1 year ago
Love the contrast between curves and straight lines and how it all fits perfectly
about 1 year ago
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Dominik Levytskyi
Cupcakes! :D
about 1 year ago
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Julia Khusainova
Dunno what I love better - cupcakes or this awesome font :)
11 months ago
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Francis Chouquet
@Julia Khusainova Thanks Julia :) I should post the vector version soon ;-)
11 months ago