Shelf in Progress

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4 Responses

  1. Jim Jeffers Jim Jeffers

    Still working out the lighting. I don't like the shading on the back panel. It looks hazy rather than a crisp shadow.

    almost 2 years ago

  2. Ollin Ollin

    Lighting fixed.
    In general, crisp shadows are to be avoided in icons. Icons are lit by only a single key light at the top–everything else is reflected light from the surroundings. Reflected light is always pretty soft. So those strangely crisp shadows from the shelf need to be blurred a bit to look natural. Most of the other shading critiques are visible in my edit.

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    almost 2 years ago

  3. Jim Jeffers Jim Jeffers

    @Ollin That is awesome! Thanks so much. I'm going to take a stab at implementing those changes myself. :)

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    almost 2 years ago

  4. Still not as good as @ollin's critique but getting there.

    almost 2 years ago

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