I agree with Daniel. Plus I would try adding some angel wings to the film reel. As long as it doesn't become to cluttered. But, overall I quite like it.
I was actually starting to try on some angel wings but they became too detailed. Maybe I'll try some smaller ones and perhaps try centering the reel... ?
Thanks!
Perhaps make the loose tap curl into the shape of a wing?
Depending on the size of the logo, you may just want to loose the two horizontal lines and make the halo a bit thicker to match the weight of the reel.
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Well believe it or not, I'm designing a (my first ever) logo for a client. :)
Simgust sais I should delete the glory, but I feel like that's kind of the twist... (Six feet above, alive not dead. Dunno.)
Could really need some advice, and I always welcome some good punches in the stomach!
over 1 year ago
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Daniel Waldron
I do like this, here are a few suggestions though...
On the halo the thick and thin parts seem to throw the perspective off, maybe just reverse it.
I would upsize the "FILMPRODUKSJON" tagline a bit, it might be unreadable at smaller sizes, it's almost unreadable here.
Besides those I think this is a solid first logo!
over 1 year ago
Pro
Matthew Skiles
I agree with Daniel. Plus I would try adding some angel wings to the film reel. As long as it doesn't become to cluttered. But, overall I quite like it.
over 1 year ago
Thanks Wald•E! :)
I hadn't though about the perspective on the halo like that... Will redo.
over 1 year ago
I was actually starting to try on some angel wings but they became too detailed. Maybe I'll try some smaller ones and perhaps try centering the reel... ?
Thanks!
over 1 year ago
Perhaps make the loose tap curl into the shape of a wing?
Depending on the size of the logo, you may just want to loose the two horizontal lines and make the halo a bit thicker to match the weight of the reel.
Like the direction!!
over 1 year ago
Pro
Ted Goas
Very nice! I'm not a logo designer, but I might suggest to ensure that the logo (or a variation of the logo) works at a small resolution.
over 1 year ago
Thanks for the great feedback peeps! :)
over 1 year ago
yeah wings, and lower the halo a bit, make it thicker, and that's that! :)
over 1 year ago