Is the hand-written typeface too much?
about 1 year ago
Nice one James.
I think the hand-written type is not much, but could use an alternate font maybe?
Also in real life perspective, the corner ends of a paper does not get glowed but stained (darker tones) :)
@Onur Oztaskiran the shadows are supposed to suggest the paper is slightly lifted at the bottom and therefore catching the light more than the rest.
I'll give it a try with a darker hue though to compare.
by James Koster
Changed the typeface to something a little more legible (I think), modified the shadows/lighting, replaced stars with smiley faces and added a punched hole.
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James Koster
Is the hand-written typeface too much?
about 1 year ago
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Onur Oztaskiran
Nice one James.
I think the hand-written type is not much, but could use an alternate font maybe?
Also in real life perspective, the corner ends of a paper does not get glowed but stained (darker tones) :)
about 1 year ago
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James Koster
@Onur Oztaskiran the shadows are supposed to suggest the paper is slightly lifted at the bottom and therefore catching the light more than the rest.
I'll give it a try with a darker hue though to compare.
about 1 year ago
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by James Koster
Changed the typeface to something a little more legible (I think), modified the shadows/lighting, replaced stars with smiley faces and added a punched hole.
about 1 year ago