4 Responses

  1. James Koster James Koster

    Is the hand-written typeface too much?

    almost 2 years ago

  2. Onur Oztaskiran Onur Oztaskiran

    Nice one James.

    I think the hand-written type is not much, but could use an alternate font maybe?

    Also in real life perspective, the corner ends of a paper does not get glowed but stained (darker tones) :)

    almost 2 years ago

  3. James Koster James Koster

    @Onur Oztaskiran the shadows are supposed to suggest the paper is slightly lifted at the bottom and therefore catching the light more than the rest.

    I'll give it a try with a darker hue though to compare.

    almost 2 years ago

  4. Changed the typeface to something a little more legible (I think), modified the shadows/lighting, replaced stars with smiley faces and added a punched hole.

    almost 2 years ago

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