Sketch for a one color logo print for a friend.
They're having a school trip on the ferry to Denmark and are printing some tees..
When birds fly low. The wind will blow - or something :P
i dig it. the rope border is great, and the typography is fun. i think the only thing it could use is some more detail or definition in the middle. maybe bring the waves up higher? i just think it's a little too empty in the middle, where the eye naturally focuses. a bit more drama in the area would be cool.
I really like the concept, texture, and especially that outer border. My only criticism is that It feels a bit packed in. In my opinion, some breathing room would really benefit this logo.
Thanks guys, and I do agree with both of you..
This was just the first layout, so after not looking at it for a few days my fresh eyes see the same as you. Ill upload once reworked.. ΓΌ
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Sketch for a one color logo print for a friend.
They're having a school trip on the ferry to Denmark and are printing some tees..
When birds fly low. The wind will blow - or something :P
over 1 year ago
i dig it. the rope border is great, and the typography is fun. i think the only thing it could use is some more detail or definition in the middle. maybe bring the waves up higher? i just think it's a little too empty in the middle, where the eye naturally focuses. a bit more drama in the area would be cool.
over 1 year ago
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Matthew Daniels
I really like the concept, texture, and especially that outer border. My only criticism is that It feels a bit packed in. In my opinion, some breathing room would really benefit this logo.
over 1 year ago
Thanks guys, and I do agree with both of you..
This was just the first layout, so after not looking at it for a few days my fresh eyes see the same as you. Ill upload once reworked.. ΓΌ
over 1 year ago