Really nice! I think George should be on the same line as James.. It may create unwanted space between that and bespoke tailoring... It just looks a tad off balanced. Especially if that mark was ever used without the 'Bespoke tailoring' bit.
Very nice, indeed. Small things - the first G could possibly drop below the baseline somehow? And, the descender loop on the small g feels like it's coming up a bit too close to the bottom of the bowl on the g as it's almost pinching. Or just thin the top of it out a bit so it's got a bit more breathing room. That fucking ampersand is killer, btw.
Love the elegance of this, but I have to agree with @Shannon Hatch on this. I think with such an elegant name, you don't want to push the envelope too much on layout.
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Poly
Here's where we ended up. Any thoughts as we aim our eyes toward refinement?
about 1 year ago
Really nice! I think George should be on the same line as James.. It may create unwanted space between that and bespoke tailoring... It just looks a tad off balanced. Especially if that mark was ever used without the 'Bespoke tailoring' bit.
about 1 year ago
Very nice, indeed. Small things - the first G could possibly drop below the baseline somehow? And, the descender loop on the small g feels like it's coming up a bit too close to the bottom of the bowl on the g as it's almost pinching. Or just thin the top of it out a bit so it's got a bit more breathing room. That fucking ampersand is killer, btw.
about 1 year ago
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Neil Renicker
Love the elegance of this, but I have to agree with @Shannon Hatch on this. I think with such an elegant name, you don't want to push the envelope too much on layout.
Love the needle. Great work here.
about 1 year ago
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Poly
Awesome stuff, thanks all. Definitely hitting the nail on the head – I'm making adjustments now and what you're all saying is working nicely – thanks!
about 1 year ago
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Poly
And the ampersand comment is quite a compliment coming from you, @Darren Booth : Ampersand Queen.
about 1 year ago
Beautiful lettering, also agree that the names should be aligned, the diagonal positioning looks off balanced. I love that ampersand!
about 1 year ago
The needle on the & is a nice touch.
about 1 year ago
Beautiful, this is totally the best option :D
about 1 year ago
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J & G logo 3
by Poly
What do you think, @Shannon Hatch @Darren Booth @Neil Renicker @Faheema Patel @Juan Gomez @Dan (Hypagraphic) ?
Thanks again for the comments - super helpful.
about 1 year ago