Vaudeville Finalish

Pro Brandon Oxendine

Check out the full version for juicy details. Looking for finishing feedback. I feel like I could do more with the details on the bulbs … in that, there is no detail on them. Maybe some light sockets?

about 1 year ago
Pro Matt Goold

This r00Ls man.

about 1 year ago
Pro David Sizemore

Sockets might be nice, and/or a really faint filament inside?

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about 1 year ago
Pro Greg Eckler

Now this is ill! :)

about 1 year ago
Jake Page

A bit of dark in or around the bulbs might help the contrast on those lights, uh, ..pop.. a bit more.

about 1 year ago
Pro Joshua Krohn

The bottom of that last E looks like is has a white highlight whereas the other letters do not.

about 1 year ago
Pro Brandon Oxendine

@Joshua Krohn That was a mistake, but I like it. It makes sense. I'm thinking of giving all the letters a slight highlight there.

about 1 year ago
Pro Aubrey

Always digging your work dude!
The grain (on the full size) looks a little unrealistic IMO.
Top edges are a tad harsh considering the lighting conditions (too sharp / no realistic light edge) http://cl.ly/GFvQ. Also, IMO.

*edit* One last thing, that light angle vs. the inside 'tray' where the bulbs are... it seems like it's all one color. Maybe using a gradient from darker to lighter from right to left might solve some of that?

Overall, it's really cool looking! Love it :)

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about 1 year ago
Pro Jake Dugard

Looks great. I agree with your comment about some kind of definition for the bulbs.

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about 1 year ago
Pro Dan Cassaro

Looks mighty nice. Maybe need to drop down the bottom of that V a bit to optically balance it with the E.

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about 1 year ago
Pro Brandon Oxendine

@Dan Cassaro Yap, thnx.

about 1 year ago
Pro Luke Alexander Atkinson

Nice! I'd make the U dip slightly below the baseline so it doesn't float.

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about 1 year ago