Check out the full version for juicy details. Looking for finishing feedback. I feel like I could do more with the details on the bulbs … in that, there is no detail on them. Maybe some light sockets?
about 1 year ago
This r00Ls man.
Sockets might be nice, and/or a really faint filament inside?
Now this is ill! :)
A bit of dark in or around the bulbs might help the contrast on those lights, uh, ..pop.. a bit more.
The bottom of that last E looks like is has a white highlight whereas the other letters do not.
@Joshua Krohn That was a mistake, but I like it. It makes sense. I'm thinking of giving all the letters a slight highlight there.
Always digging your work dude!
The grain (on the full size) looks a little unrealistic IMO.
Top edges are a tad harsh considering the lighting conditions (too sharp / no realistic light edge) http://cl.ly/GFvQ. Also, IMO.
*edit* One last thing, that light angle vs. the inside 'tray' where the bulbs are... it seems like it's all one color. Maybe using a gradient from darker to lighter from right to left might solve some of that?
Overall, it's really cool looking! Love it :)
Looks great. I agree with your comment about some kind of definition for the bulbs.
Looks mighty nice. Maybe need to drop down the bottom of that V a bit to optically balance it with the E.
@Dan Cassaro Yap, thnx.
Nice! I'd make the U dip slightly below the baseline so it doesn't float.
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