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1. Pasquale D'Silva

   Hey dude! Figured I'd pitch in some feedback. (Of course this is just my opinion)

   I think you are on the right track, but might want to take a look at some of the proportions to make them a little more appealing.

   More cranium usually always helps to sell a head mass. Needs some space for the brains to sit.

   A little cleaner line/cut on the jaw would help for definition.

   Drawing the body to be a bit more solid with construction will help tie it all together. Flesh some more meat into the shoulders!

   -Pasq

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   over 1 year ago

2. Pro Henry Moran

   This is an example of perfect feedback.

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   over 1 year ago

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   Grump Thanks to Pasquale for all of the help and suggestions. This is how it turned out. You can view the full version here: http://www.flickr.com/photos/jarodlue... September 10, 2010

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   by Jarod Luebbert

   Thanks to Pasquale for all of the help and suggestions. This is how it turned out.

   You can view the full version here:
   http://www.flickr.com/photos/jarodluebbert/4977905432/

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   over 1 year ago