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by Jarod Luebbert Sep 8, 2010
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  1. Photo Jarod Luebbert

    This guy was angrily pounding away at his keyboard in Sacred Grounds cafe. Thinking about vector'ing him. Any suggestions?

    over 1 year ago

  2. Newavhead

    Shot_1284000861_teaser Suggestions Hey dude! Figured I'd pitch in some feedback. (Of course this is just my opinion) I think you are on the right track, but might want to take a look at some ... September 08, 2010

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    by Pasquale D'Silva

    Hey dude! Figured I'd pitch in some feedback. (Of course this is just my opinion)

    I think you are on the right track, but might want to take a look at some of the proportions to make them a little more appealing.

    More cranium usually always helps to sell a head mass. Needs some space for the brains to sit.

    A little cleaner line/cut on the jaw would help for definition.

    Drawing the body to be a bit more solid with construction will help tie it all together. Flesh some more meat into the shoulders!

    -Pasq

    over 1 year ago

  3. Photo Jarod Luebbert

    Whoa! Thank you so much. Feedback like this helps a ton. Once you point things like that out you can't un-see them. It really helps a lot. This will give me some things to think about next time I doodle something.

    Thanks Pasq!

    over 1 year ago

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