Would really love some feedback on this, because we're not 100% sure it's hitting the mark. Part of a redesign for a website monitoring application (www.stillalive.com)
about 1 year ago
It may be a little bit too chunky, and could do with some better spacing. Also, the V being just over the dip in the line is a bit irksome. Could it move to the other side of the A possibly?
Much better than the old logo already though.
I dig this! But I think you have a bit more letters you could incorporate into the lifeline? if that makes sense...
I'd drop the hearts, it's obvious it's a monitor innit. Nice though Tombum!
Roger that, Nackattack - I lost the hearts on the next version but now we're trying something *completely* different.
My first thought was like @James said, to lose the hearts since it's clear enough without. That said, curious to see the completely different approach you're trying now.
I'm as curious as you are haha
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