Absolutely love the composition (you were saying about having trouble with vertical layouts?!), the 'in my' is really excellent. There are some really distinctive letter shapes in this, particularly the 'H-A' connection and the curve on that end tail of 'R'. I think 'Paint' feels perhaps a bit too heavy overall, I wonder how it would look with some more accentuated stroke contrast? (Especially on the last curve of 't', before it turns into the crossbar, as it feels quite heavy there).
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Karli Ingersoll
lots of tweaking to go and maybe some flourishes? might be a little too fresh looking.
about 1 year ago
Absolutely love the composition (you were saying about having trouble with vertical layouts?!), the 'in my' is really excellent. There are some really distinctive letter shapes in this, particularly the 'H-A' connection and the curve on that end tail of 'R'. I think 'Paint' feels perhaps a bit too heavy overall, I wonder how it would look with some more accentuated stroke contrast? (Especially on the last curve of 't', before it turns into the crossbar, as it feels quite heavy there).
about 1 year ago
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Julius Koroll
Cuute!
about 1 year ago
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Karli Ingersoll
wonderful feedback! You are the best, @Claire!!
about 1 year ago
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Paint In My Hair
by Karli Ingersoll
Something a little more victorian/classic. Probably more fitting for this project.
about 1 year ago
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Michael Spitz
Great composition Karli.
about 1 year ago
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Paint In My Hair - Revised
by Karli Ingersoll
Last one for today...thanks for all the feedback on these!
about 1 year ago
where can I get your fonts?
about 1 year ago
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Karli Ingersoll
@Kim Andersen this one is actually hand-lettered...as are most of my other logos. So, there's no fonts! Sorry. :(
about 1 year ago