Hey Simon. Here's a few thoughts. Consider trying a thinner body for the palm tree and a shorter body. Maybe a pixel thinner and a pixel or two shorter, not much. Try some brown in the shadow of the palm tree. Also, consider making the horizon lower so it doesn't hit close to the top of the sand.
You need to improve the base a bit, it looks little flat to me. And you may wanna change the wood texture, there are way better wood textures out there. Anyway nice work on the palm tree and the clouds ;)
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iPhone icon, with the retina resolution to the right.
over 1 year ago
Really cool. Maybe work a little on the water's colour and adjust the border's corber radius because it ain't quite perfect yet.
over 1 year ago
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Simon Raczka
I agree with Elias :)
over 1 year ago
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Tony Lane
Stunning. Yeah, the inner corner radius isn't correct. Also, you need to add a shark fin! :-)
over 1 year ago
Ok, thanks guys, I'll fix it :)
over 1 year ago
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Pontus Johansson
Nice one! The picture could use a more distinct inner shadow though :)
over 1 year ago
Hey Simon. Here's a few thoughts. Consider trying a thinner body for the palm tree and a shorter body. Maybe a pixel thinner and a pixel or two shorter, not much. Try some brown in the shadow of the palm tree. Also, consider making the horizon lower so it doesn't hit close to the top of the sand.
over 1 year ago
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Adi Hezral
It needs sharks! :) oh and the inner corner radius is not right too
over 1 year ago
Ok, thanks for the advices!
It was done within an hour, so I hadn't much time to improve it...
But I will now! :)
over 1 year ago
You need to improve the base a bit, it looks little flat to me. And you may wanna change the wood texture, there are way better wood textures out there. Anyway nice work on the palm tree and the clouds ;)
over 1 year ago
Great job. I really don't see any issues with your icon.
over 1 year ago
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Palm Island icon revised
by Simon Gustavsson
A revised version of my icon.
Added shark, smaller palm tree, added coconuts, new wood texture etc.
over 1 year ago