to me the bottom one is some kind of „touch-swipe-dynamic“ ... which is typical for iOS ... nice work in each case but the bottom one is the one i'd go for
These are awesome.
Although it reminds me a tad bit of the Pepsi logo, I really like the 'Popcorn' on the top left a lot more except maybe the letter 'r'. As for the 'Push', I like the idea of the push button from the right one. Perhaps having the in the same position with the topleft one instead of placing to the right. I would have probably read the guy on the right as 'Popcorn Push'.
@Jan Cantor I do see what you're talking about, I'll try going easier on that "r" and combining it with button push idea, that might do the trick... thank you for your comment.
I really like this. Bottom is my favourite; the top two feel too much like a cola identity as others have said. I'd consider integrating the "push" from top right into the bottom, centered above "Popcorn" where the "p" and "c" meet. I don't mind the swoosh underneath "Popcorn" but I don't think it adds much value either. Maybe it balances out the weight and ties it all together. Otherwise I'd simplify and remove it. No advice on the "r"... damn that's a tricky one.
Thank you guys very much, client chose the bottom one :)
@Damien du Toit thank you for your input mate... I am definitely going to give it a shot bottom logo with push button, and yeah I feel like swoosh is helping with balance because "P" is so much heavier looking than the last couple letters. I think "r" will look a lot better once I get detailed sketch out. Thank you once again!
@Birgit Zimmermann thank you buddy, even though client chose bottom one I think I'll still play around with the tope left one... as far as tombow pens go, I think they're well worth the investment, very fun to write with. :)
@Eric Millington Thanx man, as I mentioned... i'think I'll still play with it even though client went for bottom one, as majority voted.
I really dig you style, the idea of using a transparent color tombow brush to get the gesture stroke down and then using a liner define the lines is very clever, something that i will try for myself.
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Eddie Lobanovskiy
Hey guys, I'm working on a logo for Mac & iOS development company.
It is still at the very beginning of the process, so any feed back at all is really appreciated.
*Larger photo attached.
about 1 year ago
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Jordan Mahaffey
These are looking good, I think the bottom one is working the best in my opinion.
about 1 year ago
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Eddie Lobanovskiy
Many thanks to @Sergey Shapiro for sharing his knowledge and this tombow pen! ;P
about 1 year ago
I really like the one in the top, on the left side. The font is like more "rich" in details for me.
about 1 year ago
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Florin Capota
bottom here! ; nice work on them, top left has that P stem that could get confuse to an R leg
about 1 year ago
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Underbelly (via Anthony La...
I like the top left. Going to have to look into getting a tombow pen… cool stuff.
about 1 year ago
Top left is too loopy and over done. Top right has potential. But bottom is standing out best. Just watch the "cor" bit.
about 1 year ago
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Ronny Hummitzsch
to me the bottom one is some kind of „touch-swipe-dynamic“ ... which is typical for iOS ... nice work in each case but the bottom one is the one i'd go for
about 1 year ago
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Simon Ålander
Lovely sketches, @Eddie Lobanovskiy!
about 1 year ago
All of them are great, but that first one is sexy as hell.
about 1 year ago
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Adam Trageser
I agree with @João Luiz, That cap "P" in the top left is freakin sweet. Great process too, I like seeing your salmon colored marker underneath.
about 1 year ago
I like them all, but the bottom left one has a really good flow/action line
about 1 year ago
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Udhaya (via Bas Studio)
waiting for it to be digitalised!
about 1 year ago
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Liam McKay
Any and all of them work for me!
about 1 year ago
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Jan Cantor
These are awesome.
Although it reminds me a tad bit of the Pepsi logo, I really like the 'Popcorn' on the top left a lot more except maybe the letter 'r'. As for the 'Push', I like the idea of the push button from the right one. Perhaps having the in the same position with the topleft one instead of placing to the right. I would have probably read the guy on the right as 'Popcorn Push'.
I enjoy your work overall :)
about 1 year ago
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Kevin Burr
All solid options. I'm particularly drawn to the top two. Great job, bud!
about 1 year ago
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Eddie Lobanovskiy
@Jordan Mahaffey @Florin Capota @Dan (Hypagraphic) @Ronny Hummitzsch @Eric van den Boom thanks so much guys, bottom one is winning so far, I'll do a detail drawing of it with corrected some of the things you guys mentioned.
@Estuardo Rodríguez Heer @Anthony Lagoon @João Luiz Wittkowski @Adam Trageser I appreciate that guys, I might have to redraw this one too, there're few things that need to be looked at some of you mentioned, I'll be sure to post the results :)
@Jan Cantor I do see what you're talking about, I'll try going easier on that "r" and combining it with button push idea, that might do the trick... thank you for your comment.
@Simon Ålander thank you sir!
about 1 year ago
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Damien du Toit
I really like this. Bottom is my favourite; the top two feel too much like a cola identity as others have said. I'd consider integrating the "push" from top right into the bottom, centered above "Popcorn" where the "p" and "c" meet. I don't mind the swoosh underneath "Popcorn" but I don't think it adds much value either. Maybe it balances out the weight and ties it all together. Otherwise I'd simplify and remove it. No advice on the "r"... damn that's a tricky one.
about 1 year ago
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Birgit Zimmermann
bottom one for me, too, although I really like the shadow lines on the top left one!
on a side note: how do you like the tombow pens? is a full set worth the investment?
about 1 year ago
very, very nice... Top left is my favorite. Everything tucks in just right!
about 1 year ago
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Eddie Lobanovskiy
Thank you guys very much, client chose the bottom one :)
@Damien du Toit thank you for your input mate... I am definitely going to give it a shot bottom logo with push button, and yeah I feel like swoosh is helping with balance because "P" is so much heavier looking than the last couple letters. I think "r" will look a lot better once I get detailed sketch out. Thank you once again!
@Birgit Zimmermann thank you buddy, even though client chose bottom one I think I'll still play around with the tope left one... as far as tombow pens go, I think they're well worth the investment, very fun to write with. :)
@Eric Millington Thanx man, as I mentioned... i'think I'll still play with it even though client went for bottom one, as majority voted.
about 1 year ago
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popcorn step two
by Eddie Lobanovskiy
bottom version was chosen...
i drew it again with more details, vector will fix all the rest of the little things ;)
about 1 year ago
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Shaun Moynihan
Nice, really liking this!
about 1 year ago
I really dig you style, the idea of using a transparent color tombow brush to get the gesture stroke down and then using a liner define the lines is very clever, something that i will try for myself.
11 months ago