hey nick, after looking at this again, i think you should provide a little more space between each word. right now it is reading as 'MEET MEINMONTAUK'. also, the kerning in 'MEET' could use a little love. other than that, this is looking sweet man.
Love that 'M' created by the rope! Awesome amount of detail too. Agree with @Colin's comments on the spacing, but the type positioning on the top and bottom like that works really nicely.
Really dig it. If I had but one critique, it would be that the space in between the wood is so small, that its hard to make out the shape of the wheel.
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Adam Trageser
love the drama of that zoooooom!
about 1 year ago
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Colin Tierney
i see a subtle 'M'
about 1 year ago
Awesome! love that rope!
about 1 year ago
Man! :)
about 1 year ago
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Colin Tierney
hey nick, after looking at this again, i think you should provide a little more space between each word. right now it is reading as 'MEET MEINMONTAUK'. also, the kerning in 'MEET' could use a little love. other than that, this is looking sweet man.
about 1 year ago
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Helder Oliveira
Oh yeah!!!
about 1 year ago
SO SICK!
about 1 year ago
So awesome! But very hard to read man.
about 1 year ago
What do you use to fill the your text? (as in making the white spots on it)
about 1 year ago
Love that 'M' created by the rope! Awesome amount of detail too. Agree with @Colin's comments on the spacing, but the type positioning on the top and bottom like that works really nicely.
about 1 year ago
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Nick Slater
@Claire Coullon @Colin Tierney Totally agree! Certainly, will have to refine it and thank you so much for the feedback!
about 1 year ago
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Neil Tasker
this design is sick with that M in the rope
about 1 year ago
So awesome! That would be a tight tattoo
about 1 year ago
this is sick! great work
about 1 year ago
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José
GREAT!
about 1 year ago
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Jeremiah Wingett
Oh man! I want one of those t-shirts!
about 1 year ago
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Rogie
Really dig it. If I had but one critique, it would be that the space in between the wood is so small, that its hard to make out the shape of the wheel.
TWSS
about 1 year ago
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Jon Stapp | atomicvibe
I love Montauk. In fact, Montauk Yacht Club was a strong consideration at one point for my upcoming wedding. That place is frigg'n unbelievable.
Anyway, I really dig this graphic. I would definitely echo the critiques posted by @Colin Tierney @Claire Coullon and @Rogie.
But that rope-M is phenomenal, and it's obvious that the braiding is custom-illustrated and not an Illustrator brush you created. That's impressive.
about 1 year ago
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Tommy Perez
SO classy!
about 1 year ago
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kirk visola
looks sick Nick. Do you need the inner circle of wood that is in the middle. It feels a bit chunky. Just a thought. Nice as usual.
about 1 year ago
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Nick Slater
THANK YOU ALL SO MUCH! The feedback was truly helpful and hopefully I can make it better! CHeers!
about 1 year ago