Your line work is killer. I wish the antlers were fuller. Maybe lighten the weight of the seals flanking his head, they look threatening to him…bigger antlers!
This is great, John. I'd love to see it simplified more. Perhaps there is some competition between the deer and surrounding seals? I'd love to see the deer take a little more prominence as its the star of the show ;) I'm also not sure that the ornamental lines beneath MONTGOMERY add anything to the composition. Awesome work.
thanks for the feedback guys! (@Jamie Neely and @Jason Williams ) I think making the antlers larger will help with both of your comments to help keep the deer the focus.
Jamie - I completely agree and thanks for the input. This was more-so of an image that would try to wrap up the entire branding language in one piece. The logo will definitely need to be more simple than this after reading all comments and feedback. Thanks again!
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Worked on it a little more to try and make it look less "taxidermy-ish."
about 1 year ago
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Phil Lester
Superb details on this...
about 1 year ago
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Brandon Harrison
Yah, I like this even better!
about 1 year ago
Thanks dudes! @Philip @Brandon - added a larger view so you could see more detail.
about 1 year ago
Your line work is killer. I wish the antlers were fuller. Maybe lighten the weight of the seals flanking his head, they look threatening to him…bigger antlers!
about 1 year ago
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David Cran
looks great.
about 1 year ago
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Jamie Neely
This is great, John. I'd love to see it simplified more. Perhaps there is some competition between the deer and surrounding seals? I'd love to see the deer take a little more prominence as its the star of the show ;) I'm also not sure that the ornamental lines beneath MONTGOMERY add anything to the composition. Awesome work.
about 1 year ago
thanks for the feedback guys! (@Jamie Neely and @Jason Williams ) I think making the antlers larger will help with both of your comments to help keep the deer the focus.
Jamie - I completely agree and thanks for the input. This was more-so of an image that would try to wrap up the entire branding language in one piece. The logo will definitely need to be more simple than this after reading all comments and feedback. Thanks again!
about 1 year ago
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Jamie Neely
@John Wilson Awesome. I love antlers. They always remind me of Matthew Woodson's work http://www.thumbtackpress.com/products/armor-for-the-sleeping http://www.ghostco.org
about 1 year ago
nice attention to detail!
11 months ago
That deer is realllly nice. Nice harmony here. EVerything is playing nicely. Like it a lot!
11 months ago