The J seems wider than the F. I'm sure its not, but optically it looks that way. Think its just because the top left tail on the F comes towards the center a bit. Otherwise this is looking great.
about 1 year ago
Love it. I almost can't believe it works, but it does.
The corresponding swashes are great. I think it looks fine, the swash does look slightly longer on the "J" but it helps to balance out the weight discrepancy caused by the F's crossbar and the J's lack thereof, which in turn makes the "'68" look tighter than the "SF." when in reality they are equidistant from the center. All in all it works together to balance it, nice work!
This is so great. I'd drink it based on this label alone.
By adding a period and making the "SF." to "S.F." that may help balance the "'68" a bit better. Just a thought!
Good points. Thanks everyone!
the composition and hierarchy of this is eye catching!
10 months ago
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