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Mike Bruner
My (step) (although I hate saying, step) daughter Kaity asked me to see what I could come up with for her wedding announcement. So I'm stuck on these two. what ya think?
( I know, I have to make both more frilly, but I hope to do that with the invite as a whole.)
Top? Bottom?
about 1 year ago
Top :)
about 1 year ago
top.
about 1 year ago
Bottom
about 1 year ago
Top is nice and round and smooth. The bottom one I would lose the pointy points in the middle of the JK. Like em both but would also say top.
about 1 year ago
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Michael Spitz
Digging the 'J&K' monogram a lot Mike. What would we think about a gap in the arrow & raising it up a bit higher, so it doesn't interfere as much with the monogram? Also, I wonder if the names above might do well in a more classical face?
about 1 year ago
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James Cipriano
I'd say top, nice work!
about 1 year ago
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Mike Bruner
interesting comments.
Michael good points.
You also Eddie, I was wondering on those little points.
I may give this a rest and take some time to gander these over.
Thanks for the quick feed back. I'm sure my daughter will have her input also. :D
about 1 year ago
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Joonbug
top for the win please.
about 1 year ago
I wanted to add that the composition of the the one below is a lot better. There's a equal balance between all the elements. Whereas the top is dominated by the JK symbol. It makes the name's Jesse and Kaity seem like after thoughts.
And the triangular structure of the bottom one is more coherent and stronger - because of this the info it's communicating is clearer... The other one seems more haphazardous..
And it's better 'cos I said so. ;)
about 1 year ago
Love the top!
about 1 year ago
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Mike Bruner
Thanks for the comments everyone.
Because of some of the comments on the top one I made a slight modification check it out http://dribbble.com/shots/520084-Jesse-Kaity/attachments/36578
still needs work for over all balance, but I think its working a bit better.
about 1 year ago
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Yossi Belkin
Love it Mike. The attachement is sweetness.
about 1 year ago
The attachment nailed it IMO. Great stuff!
about 1 year ago
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Rich Scott
The one in the attachment for sure!
Could you maybe curve in the bottom of the '&' where it meets the 'K' lower half.. or reduce the thickness in that area.. I hope you get what I mean? Great as ever Mike.
about 1 year ago
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Florin Capota
the attachment is the way to go!
about 1 year ago
the attachment looks awesome! great work.
about 1 year ago
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TAS
I'm tooo late ... but top would have been my choice ... attachment GREAT !!
about 1 year ago
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Sergey Shapiro
Damn, Mike, you're amazing! I'd prefer top one.
about 1 year ago
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Joseph Alessio
This is hot @Mike! I really like the J&K in the top, but the symmetry of the arrows in the bottom one is great too.
about 1 year ago
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McMillian + Furlow
Love the top one!
about 1 year ago
Top
about 1 year ago
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Michael Spitz
Attachment looks great Mike.
about 1 year ago
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Kevin Burr
The attached is just right. You're just churning em' out lately, Big Mikey!
about 1 year ago
Top ;-)
about 1 year ago