Yes, the green carpet! Looks really good – talking about the lettering now ;) Absolutely love the little ball terminal on the top left of the 'B' stem; have you tried mimicking that at the top of the 'K' stem? It would mirror the similar shape at the end of the 'K's leg nicely too. If you increased the spacing between both letters, you could have both letters at the same height and still have space for that beautiful ampersand. Anyway, just some initial thoughts, great start so far!
Thanks @Maarten! Hey @Claire, thanks for the feedback! I'll try that terminal on the K's stem. Do you think the leg of the 'K' is too long? I think the K should be wider also.
Yea I agree about the width. I love that the leg extends past everything else, but it might be a bit more practical in context if it was a bit shorter (maybe up 2 grid rows or so?)
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Joseph Alessio
After-work sketches for a logomark, including another appearance of the green carpet and my "what do I do with this K" scribbles! Any thoughts?
about 1 year ago
Hot!
about 1 year ago
Yes, the green carpet! Looks really good – talking about the lettering now ;) Absolutely love the little ball terminal on the top left of the 'B' stem; have you tried mimicking that at the top of the 'K' stem? It would mirror the similar shape at the end of the 'K's leg nicely too. If you increased the spacing between both letters, you could have both letters at the same height and still have space for that beautiful ampersand. Anyway, just some initial thoughts, great start so far!
about 1 year ago
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Joseph Alessio
Thanks @Maarten! Hey @Claire, thanks for the feedback! I'll try that terminal on the K's stem. Do you think the leg of the 'K' is too long? I think the K should be wider also.
about 1 year ago
Yea I agree about the width. I love that the leg extends past everything else, but it might be a bit more practical in context if it was a bit shorter (maybe up 2 grid rows or so?)
about 1 year ago
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Joseph Alessio
@Claire thanks for the pointers! I'll do that.
about 1 year ago