Making a monogram for my cousin, and these are a few options i am working with. Any suggestions/thoughts would be greatly appreciated. Which one is the strongest? I am leaning towards the middle option.
Cheers!
I'd say the center one is strongest, but the G might still a little unclear. Try giving it a little more horizontal space before looping down and over at the end to emphasize it a little more clearly.
Also, making it 3d-ish (i.e., showing breaks where one path crosses over another) will help with the clarity.
"J" is a very difficult letter to do well, unfortunately (especially because it's my first initial...). I'd say go with the middle one, but the J in particular will need some work. Try giving the crossbar/swash more weight.
I'm with everyone else. Middle. Definitely. The most clear and elegant IMHO. The one on the right, makes the least sense. Not sure what the last letter glyph is.
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Kassie Wright
Making a monogram for my cousin, and these are a few options i am working with. Any suggestions/thoughts would be greatly appreciated. Which one is the strongest? I am leaning towards the middle option.
Cheers!
about 1 year ago
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Matt Scribner
Top middle... absolute best.
about 1 year ago
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Josh Wangrud
Middle for sure.
about 1 year ago
Nice work, Kassie.
I'd say the center one is strongest, but the G might still a little unclear. Try giving it a little more horizontal space before looping down and over at the end to emphasize it a little more clearly.
Also, making it 3d-ish (i.e., showing breaks where one path crosses over another) will help with the clarity.
about 1 year ago
middle or the one on the right has my vote! can’t decide... that G on the right rocks:)
about 1 year ago
I would definitely agree that the middle is the strongest example. Nice work!
about 1 year ago
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Josh Austin
oh man, I love the G on the center one...sorry @Kurt Madsen.
about 1 year ago
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Joseph Alessio
"J" is a very difficult letter to do well, unfortunately (especially because it's my first initial...). I'd say go with the middle one, but the J in particular will need some work. Try giving the crossbar/swash more weight.
about 1 year ago
I'm going to have to go with what everyone else is saying, middle for sure. The right one is interesting, but it almost looks like three letters.
about 1 year ago
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Underbelly (via Anthony La...
Top middle. No battle!
about 1 year ago
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kirk visola
nice.
about 1 year ago
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Kassie Wright
Thanks for the feedback guys! I am going to keep working on these, and will be posting revisions soon.
about 1 year ago
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Sara Menefee
I'm with everyone else. Middle. Definitely. The most clear and elegant IMHO. The one on the right, makes the least sense. Not sure what the last letter glyph is.
about 1 year ago