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about 1 year ago
The T and H feel a bit wider than the rest. I really like the length of the serifs on the N where as on some of the other letters the serif length almost feels stretched. If you shortened them on the H you could then get the N and H to be the same width which would help with my first comment. Overall its looking pretty sweet. :)
yes, I think the same thing, the H especially.
I would also bring the Horizontal bar of A and H a tad higher, and definitelly standardize the serifs.
something seems off with the R =)
Looking really good Matt. I love the solid, chunky feel and the subtle slants on the inner serifs is a very nice touch. I agree with @Greg and @Hubert's suggestions - other than that, I think the 'R' could do with a slightly thicker right side and maybe extend the serif on the leg slightly.
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