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Kevin Burr
Toying around with a logo concept for my brother's organic farm. Any thoughts on how to improve it is appreciated. Thanks, Dribbblers!
about 1 year ago
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Amir Karahasan
Looks very nice.
about 1 year ago
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Kevin Burr
Thanks, Amir. Any feedback for improvements?
about 1 year ago
I like it. I might try our a different font. Like a western, a wood(http://goo.gl/sCU1d), or http://www.losttype.com/ font.
about 1 year ago
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Kevin Burr
Thanks, Dave. I'll for sure try out some others. Appreciate the feedback. =)
about 1 year ago
Really nice, I absolutely love how you've done the wood on the pole. The depth and detail on the sign itself looks great, too. Those top 'R's are really distinctive, I like how the second one in particular helps take up some of gap left under the apostrophe, it's a very nice touch.
I'd suggest doing something a bit different with the typefaces. At the minute, they feel too similar — almost as if they're trying to match, but don't. (Particularly evident when you look at both 'S's since they're right next to each other). Something that creates more of a contrast would be more striking. Maybe accentuate the distinctiveness of the top line (since it's the main name anyway) and then go for something more restrained and/or contemporary, simple, etc. for 'Organics'.
about 1 year ago
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Kevin Burr
@Claire Coullon Thanks so much for the feedback, Claire. Good eye regarding the R's and how the second one takes up some of the gap left under the apostrophe. Regarding the two competing typefaces, you are absolutely right. Guess I've been staring at this for too long. I'm gonna play around with the typefaces a little more and see what happens. Something more restrained and more simple for the Organics portion seems like the route to go. Thanks again!!
about 1 year ago
Hey Kevin(can I call you Kevin?:)),
I tried to write something and then I took Claire's comment to the knee(lol nerd joke). But seriously, it is a really nice work and first thing I thought about it was "farm. absolutely". You've made a great wood texture on this stick, but one thing to be realistic - sign must be rejected to pile(but in this one I think it's unnecessary, because it could destroy composition). For the end I will refer to Claire's words about those two 'different, but similar fonts', working on it could help.
about 1 year ago
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Kevin Burr
@Filip Pietroń Of course you can call me Kevin! Heck, you can call me whatever you want, as long as it gets my attention. My brother's like to call me Skinny Bone Jones considering I barely weigh more than a piece of paper. All jokes aside, thanks so much for the feedback. I'll keep playing around with this one. Cheers!
about 1 year ago
^ I'm so going to start calling you Skinny Bone Jones — has a great ring to it.
about 1 year ago
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Kevin Burr
@Claire Coullon Hahaha! Ok.
about 1 year ago
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Burr's Organics
by Kevin Burr
Another option in the works. Any suggestions for improvement is welcome.
about 1 year ago