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Rooks & Whore

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  1. Matt-avatar-medium Matt Bainton

    Header for a community site I'm working on.

    Typography has been one of my weaker skills, so on any of the shots from this project I'd especially love insights in that arena.

    almost 2 years ago

  2. Matt-avatar-medium Matt Bainton

    @chaithoughts (twitter) pointed out the misspelling of 'thieves', which is now fixed in the PSD. Rock!

    Reactions? Thoughts?

    There will be more in the way of layout to critique when I get my next shot up.

    over 1 year ago

  3. Pro Morgan2 Morgan Allan Knutson

    My first thought is, GUH!

    over 1 year ago

  4. Matt-avatar-medium Matt Bainton

    Morgan - 'GUH' = expression of confusion? Not sure I understand.

    over 1 year ago

  5. 2 Matthew Walton

    I think “whores” looks a bit small (hard to tell the overall composition) and that the grey could do with being a tad darker, particularly to make the sub-heading easier to read. I hope that’s helpful.

    over 1 year ago

  6. Matt-avatar-medium Matt Bainton

    Matt Walton I had already moved on to a darker sub-heading, and you were spot on about the height of 'whores'.

    I've also revamped the whole presentation of the header, as the next shot will show:

    over 1 year ago

  7. Matt-avatar-medium

    The header has been expanded to span the window and the sub-heading plays with the negative space in the ampersand.

    This link shows the current full page design.

    Comment on this shot or anything in the linked composition.

    Update: Tweaked full page here

    over 1 year ago

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