Header for a community site I'm working on.
Typography has been one of my weaker skills, so on any of the shots from this project I'd especially love insights in that arena.
almost 2 years ago
@chaithoughts (twitter) pointed out the misspelling of 'thieves', which is now fixed in the PSD. Rock!
Reactions? Thoughts?
There will be more in the way of layout to critique when I get my next shot up.
over 1 year ago
My first thought is, GUH!
Morgan - 'GUH' = expression of confusion? Not sure I understand.
I think “whores” looks a bit small (hard to tell the overall composition) and that the grey could do with being a tad darker, particularly to make the sub-heading easier to read. I hope that’s helpful.
Matt Walton I had already moved on to a darker sub-heading, and you were spot on about the height of 'whores'.
I've also revamped the whole presentation of the header, as the next shot will show:
by Matt Bainton
The header has been expanded to span the window and the sub-heading plays with the negative space in the ampersand.
This link shows the current full page design.
Comment on this shot or anything in the linked composition.
Update: Tweaked full page here
keyboard shortcuts: ← previous shot → next shot L or F like
7 Responses
Header for a community site I'm working on.
Typography has been one of my weaker skills, so on any of the shots from this project I'd especially love insights in that arena.
almost 2 years ago
@chaithoughts (twitter) pointed out the misspelling of 'thieves', which is now fixed in the PSD. Rock!
Reactions? Thoughts?
There will be more in the way of layout to critique when I get my next shot up.
over 1 year ago
Pro
Morgan Allan Knutson
My first thought is, GUH!
over 1 year ago
Morgan - 'GUH' = expression of confusion? Not sure I understand.
over 1 year ago
I think “whores” looks a bit small (hard to tell the overall composition) and that the grey could do with being a tad darker, particularly to make the sub-heading easier to read. I hope that’s helpful.
over 1 year ago
Matt Walton I had already moved on to a darker sub-heading, and you were spot on about the height of 'whores'.
I've also revamped the whole presentation of the header, as the next shot will show:
over 1 year ago
Rebound
we're thieves & harlots
by Matt Bainton
The header has been expanded to span the window and the sub-heading plays with the negative space in the ampersand.
This link shows the current full page design.
Comment on this shot or anything in the linked composition.
Update: Tweaked full page here
over 1 year ago